BEC名師點評作文（8）
BEC商務英語，商務英語考試中的No.1，含金量已經無需多言。但是，無論是還在猶豫是否要參加BEC考試的，還是已經通過BEC考試的，都在疑惑到底學了BEC有什么用呢?讓我們通過下面的學習來看看BEC到底都能讓我們獲得什么。
作文題目：
You work in the Accounts Department and areresponisble for checking employees' expenses. Writea 40-50 word memo to staff:
reminding them of the importance of receipts
telling them how expenses will be paid
saying how long expenses payments take toprocess.
網友作文一：
to: all staff
from: miss Z
subject: expense claim
dear sirs or madams[1],
please remember to claim your expenses to the company. we would like to collect therelevant receipts to reimburse. [2]as usually, [3] the expenses will be paid with cash or chque.and it may take one week at most for expenses payment to take to process.
yours,
_________________________________________
[1]去掉
[2]你讓誰報銷?身份錯了。And remember to keep the relevant receipt for us to check.
[3]As usual
網友作文二：
To: All staff
From: Jackey Cheng
Subject: Expenses
May I remind all staff that you need to enclose receipts when you claim all expenses?Claims will not be accepted without receipts. Expenses are paid by cash or cheque which youcould choose within two weeks after you claimed them.
Thank you.
網友作文三：
to: all staff
from:momo
subject: receipt of the expenses
i hope to draw your attention that [1]the expenses will be paid by[2] the receipt, that'smeans you can't claim for the expenses without the receipts. we will check in 4 days [3]
_________________________________________
[1]改為please notice that ....
[2]With
[3]The whole process will be 4 days at most.
網友作文四：
To: All staff
From: Accounts Department
Subject: Expenses payments
According to the related regulation of our company, I'd like to remind you all that you canclaim expenses only by your receipts .Please take your formal invoice to the AccountsDepartments and the whole process including checking, signing and paying will cost thirtyminutes. Thank you.
Well done!
網友作文五：
To: All Staff
From: Accounts Department
Subject: Checking Expenses
Due to accounts policy of our company has been change by this month, so the expensespayment procedure must been change as the same step. [1]Now remind you, the expenseswill be paid, receipts must be taken with every expenses payments, related with the bussiness. [2]
Thank you.
_________________________________________
[1]去掉，這是和主題無關的廢話。
[2]前后邏輯亂了。The expenses will be paid with relevant receipts. The whole process will be1 week.
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