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　　在歷年四級考試作文話題中，關于辯論性的話題（加上6月份剛剛考過的四級作文）出現了4次，由下圖可以看出，這類話題在歷年四級作文中出現的頻率也很高。
　　再來回顧一下歷年四級作文中的社會熱點話題
　　Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
　　How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
　　My views on Online Shopping
　　我們就以今年6月份的四級作文On Excessive Packaging為例，具體分析下如何來寫好這類作文。這次作文又回歸了傳統的寫作題型：英語題目+漢語提綱。
　　題目：On Excessive Packaging
　　提綱：
　　1. 目前很多商品存在過度包裝現象
　　2. 出現這一現象的原因
　　3. 我對這一現象的看法和建議
　　本次作文的話題是“過度包裝”，話題不算很新，考生對這類話題應該很熟悉。作文要求中給出了提綱，那么大家寫好本篇作文的關鍵就在于緊跟題目所列提綱：現象—原因—看法和建議，來確定相應的寫作結構。要重點分析產生此現象的原因是什么，羅列出最重要的兩三點。最后結尾處別忘了給出自己的看法和建議。
　　用三句簡單的英文來總結一下怎樣構思這類作文：
　　1. Describe the phenomenon
　　2. Talk about the causes of this phenomenon
　　3. Express your attitude and give people some suggestions on solving the phnomenon of...
　　但大家在寫作中不能太死板，構思的形式可以多樣化，只要能保證這三點，其他就可以按照自己的方式來，一定要調理清晰，還可以使用長短句交錯的方式，這樣節奏便較為明朗。用詞也不能太頻繁，可以換著同義詞來寫，這樣就不會讓你的作文看起來太“干燥”。
　　我們一起來欣賞一下下面的11個范文吧，取長補短，讓自己的寫作水平快速提高。
　　范文1
　　Nowadays, the phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods is prevalent in our society. Wandering in the supermarkets, one might be dazzled by the fancy packaging of goods on the shelves. Although the government has concerned with the issue, the phenomenon still flourishes.
　　The reasons can be listed as follows. First, manufactures believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by means of over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. Second, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold the opinion that the more exquisite the package is, the better the quality will be, which encourages excessive packaging. In addition, most of this kind of goods are brought and sent as gifts to their relatives or leaders.
　　To my mind, excessive packaging can do harm to our society, for instance, it can result in the loss of precious resources and the shortage of energy. In the light of the disastrous consequences mentioned above, every citizen should be aware of the problem, and laws or regulations must be made to restrict the behavior of excessive packaging of manufactures.

 

　　范文2
　　I assume that you are familiar with the phenomenon of “Excessive Packaging”. Taking a look around，we can find examples with ease：a small computer is packed in a thick and heavycarton，clothes are putted in a well-designed plastic bagsand moon-cakes are usually placed in delicate boxes.
　　What are the causes of this problem? On the one hand, to earn moreeconomic gains, a considerable number of manufactures usually wrap their products with unnecessary but appealing materials aiming at attracting customer’s attention , arousing their curiosity and then stimulating their purchasing desire. On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the moredelicate the package seems，the superior the quality will be,the notion has also encouraged the trend of excessive packaging.
　　To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to impose restriction onexcessive packaging. Moreover, a public education campaign should be launched to arouse customers' consciousness that packaging doesn't equal to quality. Only in this way can we put an end to this trend. (185words)

 

 　　范文3
　　Nowadays, with the rapid development of national economy and elevation of cultural demands, more and more commodities with luxury packaging appear in stores or supermarkets. Lots of people select these commodities to present as gifts to bosses, friends or relatives at festivals.
　　This phenomenon, which resulted by several factors, arouses hot discussions among people. One of these reasons is the psychology of extravagance-showing among people of all ranks. They tend to feel inferior if their presents look common and simple. On the other hand, lots of merchants, out of the consideration of their commercial profits, use all their efforts to promote their goods, which need to be luxuriously packaged as to meet the demands of market. Last but not the least, some people select these over packaging commodities to please their bosses in order to get a promotion.
　　Overall, this phenomenon is an outcome of the market economy. It can promote the development of economy, but, at the same time, leads to the corruption of social morality. We should take all measures to reduce the production of these commodities as to control social environment.  　　范文4
　　In recent years, with the economy growing, allkinds of goods are flowing into our life. The packaging of goods becomes moreand more attracting our eyes. However, the problem of excessive packaging hasaroused people’s wide concern.
　　This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.
　　For one thing, the business has seen through themind of most consumers who are face-saving, for they thought that the morebeautiful the packaging of goods is, the best people like. For another thing, excessivepackaging can make the majority of merchants get high profit for the cheapcommodity by improving price. Perhaps the primary reason lies that the form faroutweighs the content.
　　Inmy opinion, it is more advisable to focus on the quality of goods than to decorateits appearance. So, it is urgent that immediate measures should be taken tostop the situation. Only in this way can we reduce unnecessary waste and have arational and pure shopping condition, making our money cost worthwhile.

 　　范文5
　　Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country. It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers. And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging. There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
　　For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself. For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging. But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon. In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it. The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging. Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervvision on excessive packaging.
　　In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.
 
　　范文6
　　Nowadays, the phenomenon of excessive packaging has becomingincreasingly serious. Lots of packages have already deviated from theiroriginal function. Excessive packaging is a serious waste phenomenon, which deserves our special attention and penetrating research.
　　There are many reasons accounting forexcessive packaging. Firstly, the promotion effects of excessive packaging havebeen greatly exaggerated by interest-driven merchants. Furthermore, it is irrationalconsumption that led to the phenomenon of excessive packaging. The last but notthe least, as everyone sees it that distempered of the related laws andregulations and inadequate enforcement of the law together contributed tothis phenomenon.
　　As far as I amconcerned, excessive packaging not only creates waste of resources, but alsocauses unnecessary environment pollution, so we should try our best toeliminate this phenomenon completely. To avoid excessive packaging, we shouldincrease our awareness of this phenomenon and change our ideas towards it. Weshould also establish the atmosphere of simple packaging, advocate appropriate packagingand build a conservation-minded society.

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