2017年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文練習(xí)：公德心
2017年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文練習(xí)：公德心
1.現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常有這樣的現(xiàn)象發(fā)生：路上有人摔倒，沒(méi)人敢上前幫忙。
2.這是人們的公德心缺失還是其他什么原因呢?
3.你對(duì)此有何看法?
范文：
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But what’s strange nowadays is that people dare not show their helping hands to those in need.I would like to elaborate my views on this issue.
Firstly,I think people’s moral sense has degraded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. Secondly,there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions.So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits.
In general,I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
第一句話(huà)介紹背景，使用“美德”virtue一詞。第二句話(huà)為轉(zhuǎn)折句，除了使用but這個(gè)表示強(qiáng)烈轉(zhuǎn)折意味的連接詞，還采用了strange和首句形成鮮明對(duì)比。
文章第二部分開(kāi)始闡釋人們公德心(moral sense)缺乏的原因。指出原因之一為自私。此處采用了egoism, 也可使用selfishness, 但不可使用individualism，后者在英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)境中通常作褒義詞講，即崇尚自尊自立之意。原因之一是內(nèi)因，原因之二是外因。Trap指陷阱，deceit指欺騙。第二段使用了內(nèi)外因、主客觀(guān)因素結(jié)合的方法，較全面地解釋了公德心缺失的根源。
最后一段表明作者立場(chǎng)，提出既要堅(jiān)持善良之心也要有防備之心。
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