2017年12月英語四級作文范文：網上購物
【四級作文】
Model 2 Shopping on the Net 網上購物
近來在一些發達地區出現網上購物熱。
一些人喜歡網上購物。
另一些人不喜歡網上購物。
【參考范文】
Nowadays Internet is revolutionizing our world and greatly facilitating our modern life. As a matter of fact, we can do almost everything on the net. To illustrate, we can conduct E-business, advertise our products, book an air ticket, buy and sell stocks, even hunt job on the web. Recently, shopping on the Net is gradually becoming popular in modern cities. However, people take different attitudes towards the new way of shopping.
Some people who prefer shopping on the virtual shopping centers or the e-commerce portals, hold that the new way of shopping has many advantages. First ,the web-stores can keep customers updated about the best selling products. Besides, they can provide customers with a wider range of choices. Most important of all , it is very convenient and time-saving .People can stay at home shopping whatever they want online.
However, others who stick to shopping in the real –life stores have their reasons. First, they argue that though time-saving, it’s a little bit complicated to pay on the Web. Besides, they think that customers can never rest assured of the quality of the commodities unless they see them with their own eyes. Finally, they believe the best way to be on guard against the fake and poor quality commodities is to shop in the traditional way. Therefore, they don’t show any interest in shopping online. However, more and more people will prefer shopping on the Web. And it’s believed that it will eventually be an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century.
范文賞析：
本文屬議論文。文章立題新穎，緊扣時代發展的脈搏。語言清新、流暢。思路清晰，筆墨洗練。結構完整，論述精當。
文章用現象法開篇指出因特網正在使我們的生活發生重大變化。如近來網上購物悄然興起且日趨普及。
隨后第二段開頭通過論述人們對網上購物這一新生事物持兩種不同態度，承上啟下，自然過渡，進而引出兩種不同觀點：一些人認為網上購物方便省時、擇物時選擇面大，商品信息新穎快捷;相反另一些人則對網上購物持擔心、謹慎態度。他們認為通過網上購物購買到的商品為假冒偽劣商品的可能性偏大。網上購物使人心中不托底。最后，作者分析后得出結論：網上購物這一新生事物必將成為21世紀購物發展的方向。
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