Employment Pressure Facing College Students 大學(xué)生就業(yè)壓力

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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 　
　　1)目前大學(xué)生面臨就業(yè)難的問(wèn)題
　　2)分析導(dǎo)致該問(wèn)題的原因
　　3)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)該問(wèn)題
　　Employment Pressure Facing College Students _______________________________________________________________________________
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行文思路
　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析該問(wèn)題產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3的要求說(shuō)明應(yīng)該如何解決該問(wèn)題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問(wèn)題解決型作文。
　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的問(wèn)題;分析導(dǎo)致該問(wèn)題的原因;從大學(xué)生的角度說(shuō)明應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)該問(wèn)題。
　　

高分范文
　　Employment Pressure Facing College Students

　　[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. [2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?
　　[3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any inpidual graduate to find a job. [3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.
　　[6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.
　　
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
　　[1]過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對(duì)比。
　　[2]設(shè)問(wèn)句引出原因，容易引起注意。
　　[3]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
　　[4]“大學(xué)生供過(guò)于求”。
　　[5]“傾向，趨于”。
　　[6]“面對(duì)日趨激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)”，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)。
　　[7]“用心學(xué)習(xí)”。
　　[8]“積累相關(guān)的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)”。
　　[9]“更加關(guān)注”。
　　佳句臨摹
　　1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation.
　　臨摹：經(jīng)歷過(guò)艱苦，我們就會(huì)更懂得如何應(yīng)對(duì)危機(jī)。
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　　2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary
　　臨摹：很顯然，我們應(yīng)該更加關(guān)注一個(gè)人的能力，而不是他的學(xué)歷。
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　　【KEY】
　　1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.
　　2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree.