2015年6月英語六級備考：作文范文及評析(1)
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t owrite a short essay entitle My View on Plastic Surgery. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1 越來越多的人接受整容手術(shù)
2 我的看法及理由
3 結(jié)論
題目分析：
觀點論證型作文要求對某一問題發(fā)表自己的看法。通常要在首段提出話題，以及關(guān)于此話題不同的反應(yīng)，并表明自己的觀點，接下來要在主題段落里論述理由，最后在結(jié)尾重申一下自己的觀點。
參考范文：
My View on Plastic Surgery
In recent years, more and more people, especially some young girls choose to take plastic surgeries. Some people argue that this kind of surgery can improve one’s appearance, thus secure a good job. Others hold a different opinion, they consider plastic surgery as a waste of money. Personally, I agree with the latter.
Firstly, beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes, virtue is more important than appearance. Plastic surgery cannot improve one’s character. Who do you think is more popular, an ordinary girl with charming personality, or a beautiful girl with arrogant manner? Secondly, success relies on one’s abilities but not appearance. Some people, especially young girls dream to find a good job after taking plastic surgery. For example, it takes one at least 30,000 Yuan to have double eyelid. Fourthly, people have to bear the risks of an unsuccessful surgery which will be a lifelong pain.
All in all, it is not advisable for people to take plastic surgeries. We can get what we want by improving our inner qualities, such as our personality and ability, and there is no need to endure the pains and economic loss of a plastic surgery.
好詞佳句總結(jié)：
Beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes
就像俗語所說的那樣，外在美不過是表面現(xiàn)象
bear the risks 承擔(dān)風(fēng)險
competent and well-trained people 有真才實學(xué)的人
arrogant 傲慢的，自大的
must 作名詞使用
e.g.His new novel is a must for all lovers of crime fiction
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