2016年12月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文練習(xí)：旅游
Writing
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay, entitled Going on a Package Tour or a Self-tour. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1.有些人喜歡跟團(tuán)旅游
2.有些人喜歡自助旅游
3.你的看法
范文：
A Package Tour or a Self-guided Tour?
①Whenever people go traveling, they will face a difficult problem of choosing between going on a package tour and going on a self-guided tour. ②People preferring to go on a package tour hold the opinion that you don't have to worry about the schedule, transportation and accommodation, which makes it possible for the tourists to fully keep their minds on enjoying the beautiful scenery and becoming familiar with the local customs. ③And what's more, it is much safer and money-saving than self-guided tour. ④ On the contrary, people who are in favor of a self guided tour argue that they will feel quite free in arranging the schedule of the tour and may stay in their fancy place (destination) as long as they like to enjoy the beautiful scenery, to go shopping, or to enjoy snacks of different tastes, completely without considering the limitation of time. ⑤In addition, self-guided tour may test and improve people's, especially the youngsters' determination, perseverance, confidence and abilities to deal with difficulties.
⑥Therefore, it all depends on what kind of tour one may choose. ⑦If I have enough time and money, I will choose self-guided tour for freedom and flexibility; however, if time is limited and I want to save energy, perhaps I will consider package tour.
解析：
①總述人們?cè)谶x擇旅游方式上的矛盾，開篇用 Whenever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，讓人眼前一亮。
預(yù)覽：
②陳述團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，綜合運(yùn)用同位語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)雜句式，提升文章的檔次。
③用And what's more表示遞進(jìn)，進(jìn)一步陳述團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
④用On the contrary進(jìn)行自然過(guò)渡，引出對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)，句中綜合使用定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句排比句式等復(fù)雜句式，為文章增色。
⑤用In addition表示遞進(jìn)，進(jìn)一步陳述自助旅游的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，其中determination，perseverance為亮點(diǎn)同。
⑥用Therefore進(jìn)行過(guò)渡，總結(jié)全文。
⑦借助however前后對(duì)比，陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。
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