2018年12月英語六級寫作解析(平衡工作和休閑)
【題目】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance work and leisure. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【參考范文】
With the rapid development of our economy and society has come a prevalent social trend that competition in the corporate world is becoming increasingly fierce, and overwork is nothing new in most companies. As a result, achieving a balance between work and leisure matters a great deal in a fast-paced world.
As far as I am concerned, there are mainly two measures one can take to balance our work and leisure time. First and foremost, it is advisable for one to put a time limit on his leisure activities, avoiding addiction to some entertainments such as playing video games and watching amusing shows. In addition, one is supposed to prioritize what he needs to do at work so as to enhance his work efficiency, thus sparing time for some leisure recreations to relax both his body and mind. Understandably, if one is unable to concentrate on his work and just idles the day away, he will have no spare time and energy for leisure activities or can not enjoy them whole-heartedly since his work has not yet been finished.
To put it in a nutshell, keeping a balance between work and leisure activities proves to be especially crucial in our modern society with a quickening pace of development. Only in this way can we achieve the high work efficiency as well as a sense of fulfillment.
【解析】
本次六級作文屬于話題作文,要求我們就如何平衡工作和休閑寫一篇作文。話題作文是新東方老師上課常講的六級三類作文(圖畫/諺語/話題)之一,第一段可以用我們上課講過的一個with倒裝句式引入話題;第二段采取總分的結(jié)構(gòu),先表明觀點:有如下措施可以去平衡工作和休閑,然后分點論述,分論點可以選擇性地拓展;第三段第一句重申下平衡工作和休閑的重要性,第二句展開下具體的好處即可。這個話題是考生平時較為熟悉的話題,寫起來難度不大。當(dāng)然,我們平時練習(xí)的作文一般how to放在第三段寫,這篇作文重點要我們寫的是how to,所以我們也可以把第三段的內(nèi)容調(diào)整的第二段;當(dāng)然,直接放在第三段寫也可以,但具體措施部分的篇幅需要適當(dāng)增加。
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