滿分作文 回信，朋友來旅游 Write back, friends to travel
下面是Li Hua給Zhang Hong的信,請你以Zhang Hong的口氣按提示寫一封詞左右的回信.
September 16
Dear Zhang Hong,
How is everything with you I hope things are going well.
There is not much news here.I just go to work every morning and come back to my apartment every night.Shanghai is crowded with people,but I don't really know any of them.I don't like the city,but my job is quite interesting,and the pay is quite good.
What are your plans for National Day If you don't have anything special,I hope you can visit Shanghai.Come and share my apartment.It is quite large and it is near the theatres,museums and stores.
Write soon,and say you can spend the holiday here.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
回信提示:回信應包括以下內容:
⑴因故信至昨天才收到;
⑵Li Hua喜歡他的工作,但不喜歡上海,Zhang Hong談自己的看法;
⑶謝絕Li Hua的邀請,并說明原因;
⑷也向Li Hua發出來杭州度假的邀請.
【參考答案】
September 25
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter dated September 16.It wasn't until yesterday that I got it,as I had been out on business for a week.
In your letter,you told me that you preferred your job to the city of Shanghai.In my opinion,Shanghai is an exciting and a beautiful place.Try to enjoy yourself in your spare time besides your devotion to work.
I'm sorry to say that I won't go to Shanghai because our school will hold an open-air party.I have to stay for the performances on the holiday.By the way,would you please come and join us in the party Hangzhou is so beautiful in autumn that I'm sure you will like it.
Yours
Zhang Hong(127)
【解題導引】寫回信與首次給人寫信不同,它必須以別人給你的來信為基礎,展開你的寫作思路,決不能置他人的來信于不顧.因此,第一步首先要細讀來信并讀懂信的內容,包括一些細節及信的言外之意.其次要對來信所提出的問題作出相應的反應,表明自己的態度和看法,并解釋其原因.最后,寫回信者也可以介紹自己方面的新聞或向來信人提出建議或要求等,這樣"一來一往"則發揮了書信的功能,達到了相互交流之目的.
另外,在寫信中,務必注意書信的格式.由于近幾年高考所要求寫信的題目均已給出了相應的頭,尾,弱化了學生在書信這一書面表達能力的培養.故廣大師生有必要加強書信中的日期,稱呼,結束語,簽名等方面的訓練,同時還要特別注意正文部分的頭尾常用客套話的運用.
九月二十五日
親愛的李華，
謝謝你九月十六日的來信。我昨天才得到它，因為我已經出差一個星期。
在你的信中，你告訴我，你喜歡你的工作，在上海市。在我看來，上海是一個令人興奮的和一個美麗的地方。試著在你的業余時間享受自己除了你專心工作外。
我很抱歉的說我不會去上海，因為我們學校將舉辦一次露天聚會。我不得不為節日表演準備。順便說一句，請你來參加我們的聚會杭州是如此美麗的秋天，我肯定你會喜歡它的。
你的
張宏
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