肥胖引起的問(wèn)題 Obesity induced problems
「試題要求」
閱讀一篇短文,然后按照所給要求,寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
「答題指導(dǎo)」
1. 明確任務(wù):寫作要求中細(xì)分了若干個(gè)小任務(wù),要先看清楚具體的任務(wù)要求,并在頭腦中對(duì)所有的任務(wù)有個(gè)通盤的考慮,同時(shí)明確中心任務(wù)。
2. 概括主旨:即認(rèn)真閱讀材料,概括材料的主旨——將與任務(wù)要求密切相關(guān)的內(nèi)容,用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確地“重組”出來(lái),完成任務(wù)一。注意:要用自己的語(yǔ)言“重組”與任務(wù)相關(guān)的主要內(nèi)容,不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子;同時(shí)要注意使表述的信息要與原文材料的內(nèi)容一致。
3. 發(fā)表看法:即發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)或看法,并用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的觀點(diǎn),完成其它任務(wù)。注意其內(nèi)容的合理性以及與閱讀材料的聯(lián)系,盡量順著閱讀材料的“文脈”來(lái)組織材料。
4. 最后檢查:寫完后,檢查文章,注意文章是否通順,任務(wù)是否落實(shí)。適當(dāng)調(diào)整文章的謀篇布局,做到觀點(diǎn)鮮明,內(nèi)容連貫,層次清楚。
「實(shí)例訓(xùn)練」
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
A new study shows that fat people in the United States suffer direct economic and social effects because of their size. The findings are from an 8 – year study of about 100,000 people. The people studied were between the ages of 16 and 24 when the research began.
The researchers who carried out the study say they consider the people fat if they are in the top of 5% of the measurement in which weight is connected with height. For example, fat women in the study were about 160 centimeters tall and weighed about 90 kilograms. Fat men in the study were about 175 centimeters tall and weighed 100 kilograms. The researchers say that more than 1,000,000 Americans are that big. The researchers found that fat young women were more likely to lose social and economic power even if they were form wealthy families. The fat women also were 20% less likely to get married and they earned an average of about $6,700 a year less than other women. The study showed less severe effect on fat men. They earned an average of about $3,000 a year less than other men. Fat men also were 11% less likely to get married.
「寫作內(nèi)容」
1. 概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),該部分的字?jǐn)?shù)大約30詞左右;
2. 就“肥胖引起的問(wèn)題”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法,至少包含以下的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),該部分的字?jǐn)?shù)大約120詞左右:
a) 簡(jiǎn)介中國(guó)的肥胖人群面臨的問(wèn)題;
b) 你認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)如何避免過(guò)于肥胖;
c) 你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該怎樣對(duì)待肥胖人群。
「寫作要求」
你可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn),也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
「參考范文」
A recent report says there are over a million fat people in the US. Fat people meet a series of problems in their life. They are less likely to get married and are badly paid when they work.
In China this problem is also getting worse and worse. The living standard of the Chinese people has greatly improved in the last two decades. Meanwhile more and more people, especially children, are getting too fat. Fat people in China are faced with many problems in their life. They receive discrimination from the society. They find it more difficult to find work than ordinary people and are worse paid when they work. In order to reduce the number of fat people, I think people, including children, should keep living an active life, having a healthy diet and exercise more. On the other hand, fat people should be treated with full respect and as equally as any human being in the society.
最近的一份報(bào)告說(shuō),美國(guó)有超過(guò)一百萬(wàn)的胖人。胖人在生活中遇到了一系列的問(wèn)題。他們不太可能結(jié)婚,并在工作中得到了很好的報(bào)酬。
在中國(guó),這個(gè)問(wèn)題也變得越來(lái)越糟。過(guò)去二十年中國(guó)人民的生活水平有了很大提高。與此同時(shí),越來(lái)越多的人,特別是孩子,都變得太胖了。中國(guó)的胖人在生活中面臨著許多問(wèn)題。他們受到社會(huì)歧視。他們發(fā)現(xiàn)工作比普通人更難,當(dāng)他們工作時(shí),他們的薪水反而更差。為了減少胖人的數(shù)量,我認(rèn)為包括兒童在內(nèi)的人們應(yīng)該保持生活的積極性,有健康的飲食和鍛煉身體。另一方面,肥胖的人應(yīng)該得到充分尊重和平等的社會(huì)中的任何人。
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