2010年3月6日雅思寫作G類書信范文及點評
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You would like to work overseas, write a letter to a job agent company, tell it:
a) what job you would like to apply to
b) what companies are you looking for
c) why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Shanghai Daily for the position of overseas mechanical engineer on Mon. Feb.23.
I would like to apply for this post. I graduated with a Master’s degree in Machine-Building and Electronics Industries in Tsinghua University in 1999 and began my career in Zhongshan ABB Company as a young mechanical engineer. In 2006, I was promoted to be the chief engineer, taking charge of the projects in Southeast Asia. I have been seeking for chances overseas in my majored domain in the hope that I can develop my potential further.
If possible, I would like to choose a mechanical company with good reputation located in Chicago. I would also prefer small private companies which allow me to enjoy a larger space of promotion.
The reason I made the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.
I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.
Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Lucy Liu
專家點評：
本次書信考察內容為申請信，申請的內容為工作。對于多數已經有工作經驗的G類考生來說比較簡單。
在回答題目的過程中，考生需注意以下三點：
1. 一定要將題目中所問的問題回答完整；
2. 編撰的細節要顯得真實；
3. 由于是申請信，因此在用詞方面需要比較正式且有禮貌；
本次所選范文已經完成了以上三點要求，在語匯使用上面也比較符合書信的要求，不失為一篇好的申請信類的范文。
本文標題：2010年3月6日雅思寫作G類書信范文及點評 - 雅思作文_雅思寫作_雅思范文a) what job you would like to apply to
b) what companies are you looking for
c) why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Shanghai Daily for the position of overseas mechanical engineer on Mon. Feb.23.
I would like to apply for this post. I graduated with a Master’s degree in Machine-Building and Electronics Industries in Tsinghua University in 1999 and began my career in Zhongshan ABB Company as a young mechanical engineer. In 2006, I was promoted to be the chief engineer, taking charge of the projects in Southeast Asia. I have been seeking for chances overseas in my majored domain in the hope that I can develop my potential further.
If possible, I would like to choose a mechanical company with good reputation located in Chicago. I would also prefer small private companies which allow me to enjoy a larger space of promotion.
The reason I made the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.
I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.
Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Lucy Liu
專家點評：
本次書信考察內容為申請信，申請的內容為工作。對于多數已經有工作經驗的G類考生來說比較簡單。
在回答題目的過程中，考生需注意以下三點：
1. 一定要將題目中所問的問題回答完整；
2. 編撰的細節要顯得真實；
3. 由于是申請信，因此在用詞方面需要比較正式且有禮貌；
本次所選范文已經完成了以上三點要求，在語匯使用上面也比較符合書信的要求，不失為一篇好的申請信類的范文。
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