2013年雅思考試寫作范文點評：跨國公司1
Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that international cooperation, from private enterprises to governments, has become increasingly prevalent. It is on account of growingly global economy, and it is beneficial for almost every country in the world.
People firmly believe that the international cooperation is good for environment protection. It is well aware that every country has its unique way to protect environment. For example, the Dutch do well in disposing of wastes. They point out that if their advanced technology can be introduced into the developing countries that are hardly to invent such good technology, not only some countries or groups but also all of the people living on the earth will benefit a lot. Of course, the countries that have invented these technologies will have to suffer from the damage in economy more or less.
On the other hand, the view taken by other people is that the main advantage of international cooperation is in terms of business. It is true that the imports have been sold everywhere in my country. To illustrate, a modern car often consists of different components from various countries. In the meanwhile, some necessary goods are always imported from other countries. However, the competition between local businesses and exotic ones is going more intense.
In my opinion, the merits of international cooperation are in both environment and the business. Also, people ought to make the best use of international cooperation to solve the serious worldwide problems such as global warming.
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講評：
原文總體上邏輯是清楚的，直接回答了題中的問題，并得出了自己的結論。結構比較清晰，而且顯示了考生在一定程度上運用復雜句型的能力。然而，一些表達顯得笨拙(如第二段中間幾句)或句子之間連接不夠自然，有的地方表達的意思不夠明確(如第二段最后一句)，有些地方不符合英文表達習慣(To illustrate不獨立使用，一般后要接賓語)文中出現了一些語法和用詞錯誤。因此考生會在這幾個方面失分。因此，根據雅思現行評分標準，我認為該文總分應為6.5分。
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