手把手教你寫作文--這樣講好雅思小作文的故事
不知道大家有沒有這種感覺,小作文其實很好寫,但是寫好總是不容易。其實道理很簡單,是因為我們用漢語描述小作文圖形特征還不是很專業,更不熟練。所以請先整理好漢語作文之后,再應用我們學過的表達寫小作文。效果一定會不一樣的。不信咱們就一起試試吧!
題目:雅思OG Test6
(開頭段就是題目改寫,在此就不多贅述了。直接進入主體段落描述。)
正在2006年之前,burglary一直是主要的犯罪方式,它在最初有一段增長,但是之后一直是一個明顯的持續下滑貫穿2004到2008這段時間,2004年的數量甚至是2008年的2倍多。在那以后,它趨于穩定,在最后的幾年只有一些小的波動,并于2012年達到1400.
Burglary was the dominant form of crime before 2006, with an initial increase but aobvious trend of continuous reduce throughout 2004 and 2008 (1200 incidents), when thefigure was one-third lower than that in the before 4 years. Then, it tended to be stable onlywith some slight fluctuation in the last few years, reaching 1400 incidents in 2012.
偷車犯罪的數量在初期一直處于中間位置,并且在2005到2006年,隨著其他兩種犯罪一起降低。然而在2006和2007年這段時間,它追上并超過burglary的數量,成為最多的犯罪類型達到2300,之后一直穩步增長2012年達到最高2800.
The amount of car theft was listing the middle of the three at the first 3 years, reducingwith the other two types between 2005 and 2006. It surpassed the figure of burglary during2006 and 2007, becoming the most common type of crime in Newport with 2300 incidentsbefore steadily rising to its highest 2800 in 2010.
搶劫從頭到尾都是Newport最少的犯罪類型,波動范圍也不大,在2008年達到最低500,最高值也不過700(2012),與最初的值持平。
The least kind of crime in Newport was robbery from person, which showed a small-rangedvariation with a lowest point 500 in 2008 and a highest one in 2012 (slightly less than 700incidents), backing to the beginning level again.
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