2017年6月24日雅思寫作考試真題范文:大學資助
Government funding for universities should only be used for scholarships for best students. And all the other funding should come from student fee and private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?政府對大學的資助應該僅用于最優秀的學生的獎學金,其他的資助的資金應該來自于學費和私人機構。同意與否?
經典傳送門:考官simon 9分寫作大小范文共80篇大賞
真題傳送門:2017全年雅思寫作真題范文大匯總(第一時間更新)
解析:政府投資類的話題幾乎都和其他話題有交叉的地方,分別與教育、藝術、科技和公民健康等話題結合。這類題目的寫法大同小異,好處就是促進教育、藝術、科技的發展,促進公民的健康,提高身體素質等等,而壞處都是一樣的:浪費政府有限的財政預算lavish the tight budget of the government,或者說給政府造成了沉重的經濟負擔impose a heavy financial burden on the government.
具體到本題,題中的only一詞過于絕對化,一般來說這種絕對化的詞都是應該反對的,邏輯可以是:先讓步(承認有一定道理),后轉折(但是不具有唯一性)。
注意,讓步段在前在后都可以,但是讓步段不能以however/but等轉折詞開頭,因為轉折詞后面才是真正的重點,前面都是鋪墊。
參考范文:
How to allocate public funds wisely has long been a thorny issue for the policymakers and now the newly-emerged problem hunting the government is to decide whether the running cost of universities should be collected from students and non-governmental entities while the government capital investment is applied to monetarily reward top students only. As far as I am concerned,I find it hard to agree with this opinion.(注意首段的同義詞替換,積累起來并運用到自己的作文中)
It is undeniably a necessity to provide scholarship to best students. As an approach to stimulate students’ interest in learning and encourage them to work harder,it would well serve the purpose of boosting the development in certain areas. To be more specific,with the vivid example set by their peers indicating that excellence earns financial reward,university students would be more likely to throw themselves in study. It offers an incomparable opportunity for the government to cultivate talents for some specific fields that are hungry for fresh blood,like military,medical service or traditional culture protection. (先讓步)
However,this never means the public funds should be utilized to reward top students only. Instead,other problems may be derived from this policy. The normal operation of a university involves many trivial yet important costs. Whereas, for a large number of young universities that have not been known by the public,it is challenging for them to attract students nor private organizations,thus no tuition fees or sponsorship. That is to say, this policy would undermine the development of universities. Moreover, yearning for money,there is a great possibility that the universities may exaggerate their merits and qualifications so as to attract more students. It is nothing less than a fraud and would mislead the students who would have become productive members of the society.(再轉折)
In conclusion,the government funds,other than used for providing monetary reward for excellent students,should also be applied for other activities to ensure the normal function of universities.
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