2017年6月3日雅思寫作考試小作文范文：餅狀圖
The charts shows the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker University Describe the difference and compare them if possible.
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題目分析：
這是一篇餅狀靜態圖，描述了本科生和研究生各自因為什么因素選擇Parker University。首段，改寫題目。接下來主體段，因為兩個圖之間并無直接聯系，所以分開寫。第一個主體段寫本科生為什么選擇這個學校，注意比較各種因素之間的大小關系，筆者按照從大到小排列，并運用了一些連接詞，比較了各個因素之間的大小差異。第二個主體段思路相似，也是要比較為什么研究生選擇這個學生，但注意在比較的過程中句式的變化。最后一段總括，比較兩個圖，揭示無論是是本科生和研究生，reputation of university都是他們選擇這個學校的最主要的原因。
參考范文
The pie charts give information about the causes of why undergraduates and postgraduates decide to attend Parker University.
From the first pie chart, we can see that reputation of university is the primary reason with 35% of undergraduates voting this factor, which is followed by the figure for cost (24%). By contrast, fewer undergraduates (18%) attend Parker University because of personal recommendation and only a small number of undergraduates make the decision based on location (8%), other (8%) and availability of accommodation (7%).
Regarding to the second pie chart, it shows that most postgraduates (42%) consider reputation of university as the main reason of their decision and fewer postgraduates (32%) choose Parker University because of cost. In comparison with these two factors, the figures for all the other factors (availability of accommodation, personal recommendation, location and other) are considerably small at around 7%.
To sum up, reputation of university is the prime consideration when undergraduates and postgraduates choose Parker University.
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