2017年5月13日雅思G類寫作考試真題范文:兒童肥胖問題
Nowadays more and more kids are getting fatter and being less fit in some countries. What do you think are the causes? How to solve the problem?小孩肥胖愈來愈多，身體愈來愈不好，原因與對(duì)策？
經(jīng)典傳送門：考官simon 9分寫作范文共28篇大賞
真題傳送門：2017全年雅思寫作真題范文大匯總（第一時(shí)間更新）
結(jié)構(gòu)分析：
這是一篇report，一般而言，report會(huì)給出一個(gè)現(xiàn)象，要求考生分析現(xiàn)象的原因、影響或者解決方案(兩兩結(jié)合)。結(jié)構(gòu)簡單，按順序回答題目問題即可(一個(gè)問題回答一段或者兩段，但是文章總共不能超過5段)，需要注意的是：
1 首段最后一句話要有過渡句來告訴考官這篇作文要寫什么內(nèi)容(類似于議論文的表明觀點(diǎn))
2 每段開頭要有中心句總結(jié)本段內(nèi)容(時(shí)刻記得結(jié)論先行)
3 需要特別注意的是，這種原因+解決方案的組合方式，原因和解決方案應(yīng)該是一一對(duì)應(yīng)的
4 report也一定要有總結(jié)段，不要把solution和總結(jié)段合在一起寫
內(nèi)容分析：
健康問題是如今很熱門的考點(diǎn)之一，常見的健康問題原因包括：長期依賴科技、工作/學(xué)習(xí)繁忙導(dǎo)致缺乏運(yùn)動(dòng)，快餐的盛行導(dǎo)致熱量攝入過多，環(huán)境惡化、商家品質(zhì)不過關(guān)、政府質(zhì)檢不過關(guān)導(dǎo)致食品不安全等等。那么相對(duì)應(yīng)的提出解決方案，政府(立法，稅負(fù))、媒體(公益廣告/教育性節(jié)目的宣傳)、學(xué)校(義務(wù)教育，課外活動(dòng))、社區(qū)(宣傳欄，組織活動(dòng))、個(gè)人(配合政策，自主解決問題)都可以做一份貢獻(xiàn)。
Obesity has become one of the biggest challenges for people in the 21st century and it has posed a great threat to children’s health condition. Therefore，the factors responsible for this problem will be discussed in this report and then the feasible solutions will be given accordingly.
The prevalence of fast food and the lack of exercise should be blamed for this worrying trend. The quick meal has long been accused of being high in fat，salt and calories and it is always served in large portions. However，these hamburgers，fried chickens and pizzas are warmly welcome among children，leading to the fact that the number of obese minors have significantly increased. Besides，the excessive reliance on technology and the heavy academic burden give rise to the neglect of workout. Children are commonly seen seating in the classroom and cars instead of running on the playground or treadmill.
The responsibility of solving the problem mentioned above falls on government and schools. The former，with its administrative power entrusted by citizens，can make laws to constrain the spread of fast food. To be more specific，imposing heavy tax on fast food industry is a good way worth trying. As for the latter，it directly cultivates and affects children’s way of life，including eating habits. That is to say，schools have the compelling obligation to lead their students to eat healthily through compulsory lessons，extracurricular activities or some warm-up or quiz before class.
In conclusion，the fatness of children is mainly attributed to two reasons. To settle this problem，the policymakers should limit the proliferation of fast food industry and schools are supposed to highlight the importance of wholesome eating habits.
(298 words)原創(chuàng)來自小站黃天枝老師
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