Task:In the past, the role of teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to wide sources of information. There is, therefore, no role of teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?教師在現代教育中無用?

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在現代社會，學生獲取信息的渠道很多，那么老師還有什么用?這個題目，各位烤鴨是不是覺得很熟悉?現在有一種觀點，有了網絡，我們簡直無所不能，其他什么都不需要了：不需要去商店了，不需要博物館了，不需要旅游了，不需要坐車去上班了，不需要學校了，不需要老師了......這些觀點在雅思考試作文中都出現過，唐老師先帶大家看看：

2016.8.4

Some people think it's necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. However, other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 【不需要旅游了】

2014.10.18

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. We can learn from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【不需要旅游了】

2014.4.26

People can work and study on the Internet without going to school or the company. Do the

advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 【不需要去上學，不需要去上班了】

2013.7.18

In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development? 【不需要去購物，去上班，面對面交流了】

2012.1.12

Some people think government should build public libraries in every town. Others believe it is a waste of money because we can get information via internet at home. Discuss both views. 【不需要圖書館了】

2010.12.4

Museums are getting less important, when people can have access to information on the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【不需要博物館了】

2010.5.15

Some people think that computers and the Internet are more important to a child's education than going to school. However, others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 【不需要學校和老師了】

不難看出，這些題目有一個共同思維模式：有了網絡(書、電視)，我們就可以獲取各種知識和信息，因此傳統的那些知識和信息傳播方式都可以拋棄了。那么，就這類題目，我們應該看到雙面性：一方面，現代信息科技的確豐富了我們信息獲取的路徑，讓信息獲取變得更加便捷容易，但是信息科技并不能取代學校、圖書館、博物館，乃至旅游、購物，原因有三：(1)網絡信息龐雜，來源不明，以訛傳訛很多，因此不是很可靠(unreliable);(2)網絡信息零碎(fragmented)，流于膚淺(superficial)，因此不是很系統(systematic);(3)網絡畢竟是冷冰冰的技術，缺乏人與人交流的溫度(warmth)，而實地旅游、購物、上學、上班、去博物館、圖書館會帶來一種人際體驗(interpersonal contact)，而人際體驗是我們人生的重要組成部分(interpersonal contact is an important part of our life’s experience)。

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Nowadays it is not uncommon to see a teacher lecturing laboriously with some students fixing their eyes on their laptop screen or smartphone and others sleeping. The reasons for this pathetic situation are varied, one important being that, with more sources of information at hand, students do not have to rely on their teachers as much as before for things they want to know. While this is certainly true in a sense, I still hold that the teacher does have a role to play in modern education.

(1) 本段先描寫現象，然后提出自己的觀點。老雅提醒高分段學生：開頭句不要滿足于提出現象，要培養用具體詞匯，具體場景來描寫現象的習慣和能力。比如本段開頭若這樣寫，效果就會差很多：Now as students have more and more sources of information, the teacher does not seem to have a role in modern education. However, I don’t think this is true. 有讀者可能問：為什么這樣寫不容易得高分呢?原因就是這樣寫顯示不出語言使用的靈活性，而高分段作文必須顯示出語言的創造性和靈活性。提醒一句，語言的創造性和靈活性不是大詞或者復雜句(雖然一定幅度的詞匯，一定的句式變化很重要)，而是寫出新鮮而具體的內容。

(2) ...is not uncommon ......不罕見

(3) Laboriously 費力地;辛勞地

(4) Pathetic 可憐的

(5) Varied 多樣的;不同的

(6) At hand 在附件的;在手邊的

(7) Rely on 依賴

In the first place, Internet, along with other similar non-human sources, isfar from perfect as a source of information and knowledge. For one thing, information on Internet may be unreliable, or even incorrect. A friend of mine recently got into serious trouble because she obtained an article from Internet and gave it to her supervisor, only to find later that the article was about Australia, rather than Austria as she had originally expected. For another, knowledge from the Internet is often incomplete and fragmented, but what students need is really something more systematic so that they can obtain a comprehensive picture of an academic field. A student who mainly depends on the Internet for knowledge may end up a Jack of all trades but master of none.

(1)本段分析把網絡作為信息和知識源的問題所在，提出了兩個原因：首先，網絡信息不可靠;其次，網絡知識不完整。兩個原因用for one thing... For another...來連接。

(2)In the first place 首先

(3)Far from 絕非

(4)For one thing... For another... 其一，......;其二，......

(5)..., only to find... 卻發現......

(6)Fragmented 碎片的

(7)Systematic 系統的

(8)Comprehensive 完整的

(9)End up 最終變成......

(10)Jack of all trades, master of none 什么都懂，什么都不專

But even if the Internet and other similar sources provide information as accurate and systematic as the teacher does in class, I still do not agree that they can supersede the classroom teaching. After all, going to school is not just about obtaining information. It is more of an experience. Compared with the “cold” and“indifferent” Internet, the communication with teachers in classroom often carries a tinge of human warmth and that personal feeling is sometimes even more important than the knowledge itself and becomes part of our memory of school life.

(1)本段是從正面討論老師的位置不可取代。當然，老師的作用絕不僅限于面對面交流時的親切感和個人感，還可以給學生提供精神榜樣等，但雅思作文不是寫論文，只要寫出足夠言之成理的東西即可，不需要面面俱到。

(2)Supersede 替代;取代

(3)After all 無論如何;畢竟

(4)Indifferent 漠然的;不關心的

(5)A tinge of 一絲

So, in terms of knowledge-based education, the Internet and other sources do facilitate our access to information (though sometimes inaccurate and incomplete), yet when it comes to experience-based education, which I think is more essential, there is always an important role for the teacher to play. (355 words)

(1)本段結尾，總結全文觀點，再明確提出自己的立場。

(2)In terms of 在......方面

(3)Facilitate 加快;有利于

(4)Access 獲取;進入

(5)When it comes to... 當談到......

(6)Essential 重要的，關鍵的

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