2018年4月14日場雅思寫作預測：青少年犯罪問題
雅思寫作臨場沒有思路，不如多看看寫作思路講解和寫作范文。小站雅思君為大家帶來4月14日場的雅思寫作預測及高分范文。本期雅思寫作預測犯罪類話題，有關青少年犯罪問題，題目為：A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right, or the young criminals should be sent to the jail?
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作為16年首個換題月的第二場考試，這個題目著實是達到了它應有的難度。首先，問法比較新穎，先是就題干中的觀點進行提問，然后又提問考生對另外一個觀點的看法。所以這道題，其實就是對兩個觀點的討論，可以轉換成: Some people think that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school should get a punishment to clean streets, while others think that young criminals should be sent to the jail. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. 那么這樣一來，這個題目對我們而言就非常熟悉了。
對于“打掃街道衛生”這個立場，我們應該是支持的態度，因為題目中所提到的罪犯年僅14歲，在大多數國家的法律當中，未成年人犯罪都是需要從輕處罰的。因此，我么可以用 “1.小孩子心智不成熟;2.小孩子的可塑性比較強，應當以教育懲罰為主”這兩個觀點來支持。對于“送進監獄”這個立場，我們則是不支持的態度，那么我們的寫法就是先讓步：監獄可以使孩子明白犯罪的嚴重性，之后針對讓步進行反駁：但是孩子可能會受到監獄中其他罪犯的不良影響，不利于心理發育。
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Nowadays, Children are exposed in a diversified environment where they have absolute access to internet, being able to befriend with people from a variety of backgrounds. This may result in children’s antisocial behavior and there is a beat debate on whether teenagers who commit serious crimes should be punished by doing some volunteering jobs or being imprisoned.
Contributing to their community can be an effective way to tell them that they are victimizing other people. One argument in its favor is that they are immature. It would be a difficult thing to predict the consequences of their behavior and law knowledge not be sufficiently acquired at that young age. Another important factor in this respect is that they are formable in character compared to adult criminal, thus it is better to educate them. Doing something valuable to their society can embed a sense of responsibility in them and give them an opportunity to reflect on their deviance, which will truly rectify their criminality.
However, those who advocate custody sentence may have some plausibility to some extent. Allowing them to recognize their mistakes is the priority of taking adolescent law breakers into prison. One received harsh penalty, preventing persistent crime seems to be possible. But the believers of this have ignored the issue over what if they are negatively influenced by other prisoners? When they find jobs, how should they face the society with an ex-record especially .
In conclusion, I therefore believe that having faith in the young who go astray cannot be a more effective way to solve raging young criminal activities and taking responsibility for their living surroundings is the best way to do this.
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