08年PETS寫作開頭寫作技巧
首先,我們為考生介紹兩種經典的開頭方法:
1. 開頭技巧一:名人名言
開頭引用名人不僅能夠作為很好的切入點展開話題,而且還能夠顯示考生深厚的英語功底。可能有的考生會疑惑:“我沒有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語名言?”一般來說,引用名人名言不一定要記住每個單詞才行。 如果考生能夠記住大致的內容,也可以引用。引用名人名言的經典句型:
A proverb says, “you are only young once.” (適用于已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用于只記住大致意思的名言)
更多經典句型:As everyone knows, no one can deny that…
我們為考生總結了一些考生常用的名人名言,附在本節后面,供考生記憶使用。
2. 開頭技巧二:數字統計
要想使自己的論證更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試考生只需要記住一個大概得數據即可。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
除以上兩種特殊用法以外,我們為考生整理了以下開頭常用句型,供考生參考:
文章開頭句型:
1. 對立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,
適用于有爭議性的主題.
例如
1) When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ... But I think/view a bit differently.
2) When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the proffer/latter ...)
3) Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
2. 現象法 引出要剖析的現象或者問題, 然后評論 .
1) Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.
2) Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brought to public attention)
3)Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
3. 觀點法 ----開門見山,直截了當地提出自己對要討論的問題的看法.
1) Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ...Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than...
2) Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
3) Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
4) Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......
4. 引用法 ----- 先引出有代表性的看法, 來引出文章要展開論述的觀點!
1) "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people.
"Education is not complete with graduation." Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.
2)"........." How often we hear such statements/words like those/this. In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "......".
5. 比較法 ------ 通過對過去,現在兩種不同的傾向,觀點的比較, 引出文章要討論的觀點.
1) For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
2) People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new.
6. 故事法 ---- 先講一個較短的故事來引發讀者的興趣, 引出文章的主題.
1) Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenomenon of... has aroused public concern.
2) I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.
3) Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.
7.問題法 ----- 先用討論或解答的設問, 引出自己觀點, 適用于有爭議性的話題.
Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly, some ..., others ...But in my opinion, ...... .
(二)主體段落的寫作原則
作文的主體部分是全文文字最密集的地方,也是最彰顯考生功底的地方,于是,我們總結出了關于主體段落寫作的幾個原則,考生在平時練習時,注意體會掌握。
1. 長短句原則
中國考生語法功底普遍很好,因此,在寫作文時,很容易出現長句堆積的現象。但是,這樣很容易使得文章枯燥乏味,讀起來費解。相反,寫一個短小精辟的句子,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且,如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,更能夠使文章文采飛揚。
在這里我們強烈建議考生:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝。文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
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