2016專四作文范文：宿舍安全
2016專四作文范文：宿舍安全
2016專四改革已塵埃落定，專四作文取消了原有的小作文（便條），大作文以材料作文為主題，約200詞。新東方在線英語(yǔ)專四頻道整理了2016專四作文范文供專四考生們參考引用。
審題思路
本題是一道問(wèn)題解決/建議型的題目，一般建議型題目的寫法是復(fù)述題干內(nèi)容 ，直截了當(dāng)提出自己的建議, 然后擺事實(shí)講道理說(shuō)明該建議有什么好處 ，最后把文章引入一個(gè)自然的總結(jié)段中即可。但是根據(jù)這個(gè)題目的題干，重點(diǎn)不是用理由來(lái)支持某個(gè)建議，而是詳述該建議是什么，即分小點(diǎn)說(shuō)明學(xué)校和學(xué)生應(yīng)該分別做些什么。
范文賞析
On Dormitory Security
It is reported that recently in quite a few universities, dormitories on campus have been broken into and burglaries have happened every now and then. In fact, students have complained a lot that burglaries are like nightmares in their college years. I think it’s high time that both students and universities did something to reduce and eliminate this kind of crime.
引言部分：作者先說(shuō)明有報(bào)道說(shuō)最近寢室遭竊的現(xiàn)象很多，困擾著學(xué)生們，然后提出學(xué)生和學(xué)校都應(yīng)采取措施。
On the one hand, there are some measures which universities can take. First, universities should have all the dormitory doors and windows checked, find out and repair the broken ones so that thieves cannot go in easily. Second, the number of university security staff should be increased. Security personnel should patrol on campus and cross-question any suspicious person.
On the other hand, students should also do something to protect their belongings. First, when they leave their dormitories, they should keep doors and windows locked to keep out sneak10 thieves.Second, students should lock their valuables11 up in lockers12. In this way, they can reduce the risks of burglaries happening.
主體部分：作者分兩方面來(lái)說(shuō)，并在每方面下面又分了幾個(gè)小點(diǎn)，這樣一則可以豐富內(nèi)容，二則使整篇文章邏輯清晰，銜接緊湊，成為一個(gè)完整的整體。
In one word, both students and universities should do something to reduce burglaries in dormitories. And only in a safe dormitory can a student live and study happily.
總結(jié)部分：作者用in one word自然而然地對(duì)上文進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，并進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明只有寢室安全才能讓學(xué)生生活和學(xué)習(xí)得更開(kāi)心。
亮點(diǎn)回放
1. be broken into: “被闖入”，常用于指房子有竊賊闖入。
2. every now and then: “時(shí)而，不時(shí)” ;近義詞有every now and again ，every so often, more often than not等 。
3. nightmare: “噩夢(mèng)，使人特別痛苦的事情或經(jīng)歷”。
4. it s high time that: “該做某事的時(shí)候到了” ;如果在time前面有high ，the very等詞 ，那么從句中要使用過(guò)去時(shí)。
5.eliminate: “除去，消除” ;這里還可以使用get rid of，root out ，wipe out ，weed out等來(lái)表示 同一意思。
6. personnel: “職員” ;作名詞 ，注意personnel和personal(個(gè)人的)的區(qū)別。
7. patrol: “巡邏 ，巡查”。
8. cross-question: “盤問(wèn)，審問(wèn)” ;該詞 的使用體現(xiàn)了作者詞匯量的豐富和用詞的精到。
9. suspicious: “可疑的，多疑的” ;也可以使用doubtable和questionable來(lái)代替 。
10. sneak : 常用作動(dòng)詞，表示 “偷偷摸摸做/走”，此處用作形容詞，表示“出其不意的，暗中進(jìn)行的”。
11. valuables: valuable常用作形容詞 ，表示 “貴重的” ;當(dāng)用作名詞且為復(fù)數(shù)時(shí) ，表示 “貴重物品”。
12. locker: “更衣箱，儲(chǔ)物柜” ;該詞用得非常到位 。
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