實例講解托福獨立寫作讓步段的寫作方法
在托福寫作中,很多都嘗試著去寫讓步段,但大部分考生的目的并不是讓文章邏輯更加穩(wěn)固,最大的目的是湊字數(shù)。那么真正的托福獨立寫作的讓步段應該有什么作用?應該如何寫呢?這里小編就為大家?guī)砹霜毩懽鞯淖尣蕉蔚膶懛?,一起來看看吧?/p>
托福獨立寫作中,一個好的讓步段會讓文章的邏輯關系更嚴密,論證更豐富,更符合學術文章的要求。然而,很多考生嘗試著寫讓步段,卻也有湊字數(shù)的目的,無法發(fā)揮讓步段的最佳威力。
到底怎樣寫出好的讓步段?寫還是不寫?這是個問題很多同學有疑問,在一篇完整的獨立作文中,讓步段是不是一定要寫呢?可不可以不寫呢?讓步段不是必須要寫的,考生們可以在作文里只提出支持自己觀點的兩至三個正面的理由,這樣也可以得出最后的結(jié)論。比如說是否同意新的科技產(chǎn)品發(fā)布,過段時間購買比馬上購買要好,我們完全可以只提出過段時間購買的兩個正面理由:
一. 價格會更便宜;
二. 產(chǎn)品的性能會更優(yōu)化,這樣整篇作文的論點還是明確的。
但是這篇文章當然也可以加上讓步段,過段時間再買的壞處,或是馬上購買的好處。這樣會顯得這篇文章論證的邏輯更加嚴密和全面,我們確實是進行了優(yōu)劣對比后,才得出自己的觀點。
尤其要注意的是,如果作文題目本身的觀點的反面并不能夠被忽略,那么建議讓步段是一定要寫的,這樣顯得我們得出自己的觀點才不牽強。
比如作文題目Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.。我們可以寫正面的兩個觀點,即玩電腦游戲的兩個好處,但是我們同樣不能忽略玩電腦游戲的壞處,所以就要寫讓步段了,不然觀點就會顯得過于偏激。
怎么寫讓步段?這又是個問題重中之重: 讓一小步,進一大步!
讓步段的最重要目的是對讓步內(nèi)容地不斷削弱,以退為進,先提出壞處,然后再否定它。但是要記住的是讓步段與支持段結(jié)構(gòu)一致,也是有主題句,然后要對主題句進行展開解釋?! ∷猿R姷奶茁肥牵褐黝}句(不可否認A也有壞處)+解釋(進一步解釋說明壞處是什么)+讓步(但是呢,這些壞處可以被解決掉,或是不太重要)
1.讓步段主題句寫法讓步段的主題句一般是這樣的:不可否認的是,A可能會有一些壞處。這里我們盡量語氣要委婉些,下面是一些會用到的詞組表達:——Admittedly / Undoubtedly / There is no denying that / It cannot be denied that ——May / might / possibly / probably ——One / one or two / a couple of / minor / several ——To some extent / to some degree【常見錯誤】很多考生讓步段用although開頭,但是although后面只能跟一個從句,所以后面主題句的內(nèi)容就沒有辦法展開了。
2. 讓步如何實現(xiàn)讓步段的表述可以參考以下模式:?讓步方的好處比支持方的好處次要,或者支持方的壞處比起好處來次要。However, the advantages of A are more important than those of B.讓步方優(yōu)點與支持方優(yōu)點比起來較少,或支持方缺點與優(yōu)點比起來較少。However, the advantages of A are far more than those / that of B.However, the advantages of A outnumber those / that of B.對方的好處,我方也可以有辦法得到;我方的壞處可以有辦法消除。However, the problem can be solved by … However, the negative influence can be eliminated by …
3. 讓步段范例賞析Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
主題句: Admittedly, playing computer games does harbor several drawbacks.
解釋: Some children are addicted to playing computergames and ignore their studies, thereby suffering from poor academic performance. Also, over exposure to computer games with high concentration will sooner or later cause the impairment of their eyesight.
讓步:However, most children are able to control themselves to play games in moderation. Also, their parents can intervene and supervise as well. Specifically, they could set strict rules on how much time their children could play games everyday and on what conditions they could do so, therefore it is completely unnecessary to forbid them to play computer games.
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