托福寫作低分的7大硬傷
托福考試中，很多同學(xué)在托福寫作中，總是拿不到高分。雖然同學(xué)們平時(shí)的托福備考練習(xí)很努力，但是最后的托福分?jǐn)?shù)卻不盡如人意。其實(shí)，同學(xué)們不妨來(lái)看看你的托福寫作過(guò)程中，是否有這些低分硬傷。本文小編將為同學(xué)們整理托福寫作低分的7大硬傷內(nèi)容，希望能夠幫助正在備戰(zhàn)托福的同學(xué)們！
1.托福寫作中拼寫錯(cuò)誤
這里的拼寫錯(cuò)誤不是指在考試時(shí)候的誤打，而是本身對(duì)詞匯拼寫記憶的錯(cuò)誤。
In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.
——judgement應(yīng)改為judgment
2.托福寫作中用詞不當(dāng)
學(xué)生們寫的作文里或多或少都會(huì)有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯?wèn)題，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。
In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
——problems應(yīng)改為questions
3.托福寫作中表達(dá)中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
句子中劃線部分的表達(dá)過(guò)于中式化。
4.托福寫作中亂用大詞
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問(wèn)題：
1)該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能連用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
5.托福寫作中表意重復(fù)
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。
6.托福寫作中例證夸張
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒(méi)有這么大。
7.托福寫作中固定用法錯(cuò)誤
To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
——To some extends應(yīng)改為To some extent
以上就是小編為同學(xué)們整理的托福寫作低分的7大硬傷的內(nèi)容，希望能夠幫助正在備考托福的同學(xué)們！
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