托福寫作話題展開 有錢不工作會快樂嗎
托福寫作的一大難點在于話題展開，尤其是要求考生能用英文表達自身獨立觀點的托福獨立寫作，很多同學不是不會寫，而是不知道該寫啥，看到題目往往大腦一篇空白，其實托福獨立寫作話題展開都有套路可循，下面我們來看一篇托福寫作話題展開的真題演練。
People who don’t work since they get enough money are rarely happy.
金錢和快樂的關系是人們爭論已久的。如果有人認為金錢和快樂沒有關系，那么說有錢人不快樂也是沒道理的。但是這道題里面還牽扯了另一個關鍵詞——工作。所以，我們可以工作帶給人的價值為切入點來拓展思維。
Value 1: Sense of achievement
根據馬斯洛需求層次理論(Maslow's hierarchy of needs)，人的最高需求是要自我實現(Self-actualization)，而sense of achievement就是自我實現的一個方面，也是人能快樂的因素之一。
Sample sentences:
1. The lack of goal and motivation will make people feel bored and useless no matter how rich they are.
2. The research has proved that when people work hard for their goals and manage to realize it, the process will bring them great sense of achievement which is more likely to make people happy than money.
Value 2: Team work
長期孤獨的人大部分都會感覺抑郁(depressed)，因為人是社會型動物(social animal)，歸屬感(sense of belonging)是人感覺快樂的一個重要條件。
Sample sentences:
1. Statistics shows that 90% people working with a group are more likely to be happy.
2. People possessed money but don’t work may feel isolated, which will lead to depression.
Value 3: Common topics
社會上的絕大多數成員都要工作，如果有錢卻不工作容易與社會脫節(disconnected)，跟其他人缺乏共同話題。
Sample sentences:
1. As most people in the society need to work, people who don’t work would be lack of common topics with other people.
2. People who don’t work will be disconnected with the rest of the society, which may lead to depression. In whatever sense, money cannot buy happiness for people.
以上就是關于金錢和快樂的關系的托福寫作話題展開真題剖析，我們在備考托福獨立寫作的過程中一定要注意轉換思路，也要注意多做練習多反思總結，才能獲得托福寫作能力和分數的提升。
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