一、題目

針對目前全國大量大學生面臨就業的嚴峻形勢，你班同學展開了熱烈的討論，請你根據以上提示及下面表格中的內容，介紹本次討論情況并談談自己的看法。

70%的同學認為不要期望太高的收入，及早就業，減輕家庭負擔;到西部、農村等地區，尋找更多的發展機遇。

20%的同學支持繼續深造或去職校學習實用技能，為今后擇業做更好的準備。

10%的同學嘗試自己創業。你的看法(請考生聯系自己擬定內容，列舉兩至三點)

Increasing numbers of college graduates are finding themselves in a situation where too many jobseekers are fighting for survival.Our class has had a heated discussion on this problem.Some students hold different ideas.___________________________________________________

二、主要問題

本次作文中，學生易犯的錯誤有：

1、不會翻譯“自己創業”;

2、把“繼續深造”翻譯成：go further studies;

3、自己的觀點和看法寫得空洞無物;

4、沒有對70%，20%等百分數進行適當處理;

5、學生的作文大多停留在完成任務上，很少有精彩之處。

三、參考范文

The majority of the students,making up 70%,are more realistic and don’t expect a high salary.They think it sensible to land a job as soon as possible.In this way,they hope to reduce the burden on their families.They also believe there are better opportunities for development offered in the west or in rural areas.

大部分的學生，占70%，更現實，不要期望高工資。他們認為盡快把工作做的很明智。以這種方式，他們希望減輕他們的家庭負擔。他們還認為，在西方或在農村地區提供更好的發展機會。

In order to be better prepared for the future job-hunting,one fifth of them choose to stay in universites for further education,or go to vacational schools to learn practical skills.The rest 10%are brave enough to start a company of their own,thus creating jobs for other graduates as well as themselves.The choice isboth challenging and rewarding.

為了給今后的求職做好準備，五分之一的人選擇呆在大學深造，或進入職業學校學習實用技能。其余的10%個人都有足夠的勇氣去開創自己的公司，從而為其他大學畢業生創造就業機會。選擇的是挑戰和獎勵。

As for me,I will take my interests and abilities into account while choosing a job.It may not be a decent job with a handsome income,but will surely be most suited to me.I hope my first job will offer an opportunity to learn new skills and gain rich experience.

至于我，我會把我的興趣和能力考慮，同時選擇一個工作。這也許不是一份體面的工作，收入可觀，但肯定是最適合我的。我希望我的第一份工作將提供一個機會，學習新的技能和獲得豐富的經驗。(www.yingyuzuowen.cn)

70%of them think it makes sense that they realize an early employment by lowering their income expectations,thus reducing the burden on their families.They also believe there’re better opportunities for development if they go to work in the west or rural areas.20%of them consider full employment an unrealistic goal,so they choose to continue their further study or go to vocational schools to learn some practical skills to make better preparations for future careers.Finally,the rest 10%determine to set up their own businesses.

70%的人認為他們通過降低收入預期來實現早期就業，從而減輕他們的家庭負擔。他們還認為，如果他們在西部或農村地區工作，有更好的發展機會。20%的人認為充分就業是一個不切實際的目標，所以他們選擇繼續學習或繼續職業學校學習一些實用技能，以更好地為未來的職業生涯做準備。最后，其余10%個決定建立自己的業務。

As for me,I think after a series of timely measures taken by the government,we are confident about and capable of overcoming the current difficulties and challenges and the employment prospects for graduates will be better soon.So all we need to do now is plan and act in ways that reflect the reality,to assure that we make full use of our talent and skills.

至于我，我認為政府采取了一系列的及時措施，我們有信心，有能力克服目前的困難和挑戰，畢業生就業前景會更好。所以我們現在需要做的就是計劃和行動，以反映現實的方式，以確保我們充分利用我們的才能和技能。

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