舉例說明:我們學(xué)校充滿愛-Our School----Full of Love

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我們學(xué)校充滿愛

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假定你們學(xué)校有同學(xué)得了重病需要做手術(shù)，但手術(shù)費(fèi)用昂貴，該同學(xué)家里負(fù)擔(dān)不起。于是，你校學(xué)生會(huì)便號(hào)召師生捐助。在短短的幾天內(nèi)學(xué)生會(huì)就收到好多錢。在許多好心人的救助下該同學(xué)順利做了手術(shù)，他很感激大家。這正是：你們學(xué)校充滿愛心。【作文示范】

Our School----Full of Love

On April20, after two classes in the morning, the broadcasting station① of our school went on the air. The announcer②told us the sad news that a student named Tong Kai in Junior2 needed a kidney transplant③. It would cost one hundred thousand yuan. It was impossible for his family to pay so much money, but Tong was CRItically④ ill, so the Student Union called on everyone to do something to help Tong Kai.

The news soon spread over the campus. Everyone was anxious about his illness. From that day on, the teachers and students began to contribute money to help him. We were not rich, but all of us were generous contributors⑤. The teachers donated⑥ part of their salaries. Many students helped Tong with their pocket money. Li Bin, a student in Junior 2, contributed eighty yuan. He said,“The money we have contributed is not enough for Tong＇s operation, but we have done what we can. We all hope that Tong Kai will get well soon and come back to study with us.”His simple words expressed our deep affection⑦. In only three days the Student Union received ten thousand yuan in all.

With the help of many schoolmates, teachers and other kind people, Tong got enough money and was operated on successfully. He said,“I thought I was the most unlucky person in the world, but now I think just the opposite. I live with the care and love of thousands of kind people. I＇ll face life bravely.”While saying these words, he couldn＇t keep back his tears.

What a warm big family our school is!

（選自《英語畫刊》高中版1996年第6期）

【詞語解釋】

①broadcasting station廣播站

②announcer[ ＇nauns ] n．廣播員

③kidney transplant[＇kidni tr$ns＇pl%:nt]腎移植

④CRItically[＇kritik li] ad．危急地

⑤contributor [k n＇tribju(:)t ] n．捐助者

⑥donate[d u＇neit] v．捐贈(zèng)；捐獻(xiàn)

⑦affection[ ＇fekM n] n．愛，友愛

【寫法指要】

這是一篇用事實(shí)說明“校園充滿愛”的文章。第一段是背景介紹；第二、三段用舉例法說明主題，大部分是概述，只舉了一個(gè)典型事例，而且也沒有用“for example”等銜接詞語。最后用一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短句子總結(jié)全文，抒發(fā)感情。