好壞對比:有禮貌與沒禮貌-Good Manners and Bad Manner.
有禮貌與沒禮貌
【內容提示】
每個社會都提倡文明禮貌行為而反對不文明沒禮貌的舉止。有禮貌的人會受到人們的尊重和支持，沒禮貌的人會遭到大家的唾棄和反對。請你就這一問題寫一篇短文將各自的優劣作一對比。
【作文示范】
Good Manners and Bad Manners
Every society encourages good manners but opposes① bad manners. People with good manners enjoy many supports while those with bad manners suffer a lot.
Everyone likes a person with good manners. A person with good manners will be welcomed everywhere. In public places, such as in shops, a salesman with good manners will probably make a good sale. A teacher will do his or her job smoothly② and happily in the class where the students have good manners. If you ask for a help, you should be careful of your manners. Almost everyone likes to serve the person with good manners.
On the contrary, no one likes a person with bad manners. A person with bad manners will be refused everywhere. We dislike those who spit at random, who speak aloud in the library, and who smoke with a lady aside. They are all bad manners which are impolite to others. Those with bad manners may be considered as lacking in knowledge and self cultivation③. People even do not want to talk with them. There is no doubt that nobody would like to serve or help a man with bad manners.
Then, what should we do in our daily life? We should be careful of what we say and what we do. Good manners mean that you show your respect to others. If you respect others, other people will respect you in the same way. You will have less trouble in your everyday life.
【詞語解釋】
①oppose[ ＇p uz] v．反對；反抗
②smoothly[＇smu:Jli] ad．順利地
③self-cultivation[＇self?kl)ti＇veiM n] n．修養
【寫法指要】
本文是對好壞兩種行為的對比。文章采用“啟、承、轉、合”的模式安排題材。第一段引出篇題，第二段寫好的一面，第三段用銜接語“on the contrary”與第二段承接，引起壞的一面，第四段是結尾段，作者先提出建議，再給“good manners”下定義，最后指出“有禮貌”的好處。
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