范文:Smoking
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「要求」
要求：現在，社會上吸煙者的數量十分龐大，其中也不乏青少年。請你談談對這種現象的看法，提示要點：
吸煙者的心態。
吸煙的危害。
應采取哪些措施禁止吸煙。
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「范文」
Smoking
Smoking is very popular among people in China. Some of the smokers believe that smoking can ease their nerves. But they never think of the effect it might have on other people's health. Government authorities should launch an early campaign to educate people on the danger of smoking. Information of the negative effects of particularly the young， could learn of the danger of the habit.
「評語」
審題準確是本文的一個突出特點。作者既把論述的重點放在了3個提示要點之上，又沒忘題目中涉及到的對青少年的影響。本文詳略得當，值得大家學習借鑒。
戒煙嘛，很容易，我已經戒過兩千多次了──馬克吐溫
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