范文:A Comparison Between Two Kinds of Clothes
「要求」
夏天到了,有的同學換上了尼龍面料(nylon)的夏裝,而有的同學則穿起了絲和棉等天然面料制成的衣服。英語老師在課堂上讓大家圍繞這兩類面料的利弊進行討論,然后寫一篇短文對二者進行比較,指明你喜歡哪一種,并說出你的理由。
「范文」
A Comparison Between Two Kinds of Clothes
Clothes made of nylon have big advantages over those made of natural materials such as cotton and silk. First of all, they are more durable. That is to say, they don't wear out so quickly. Second, they are easier to wash and dry. So the wearer can spare time while washing and drying them. Besides these two advantages, clothes made of nylon are lighter, and they keep their shape longer.
In spite of this ,clothes made of nylon can not match those made of natural materials in several respects. They are not quite as beautiful as silk, and as cheap as cotton. They make the wearer feel hot and sticky, therefore less comfortable than clothes made of natural materials.
As each kind has its advantages, it is hard to say which I prefer. There are clothes made by mixing cotton or silk with nylon. They can make up the deficiencies of the former by acquiring the strong points of the latter. I prefer this kind of clothes.
「評語」
本文采用比較和對照的方式,說明了兩類用不同材料制成的衣物的長處和短處。文章先談了以尼龍制成的衣物的長處――耐穿,易洗,易干,輕便,不易變形等;接著又談論了用棉和絲等天然材料制成的衣物的長處――美觀,柔軟,舒適等;最后寫明了作者的選擇及作出這種選擇的原因。該文結構清晰,論據充分,觀點明確。文章套路結構具有代表性,值得同學們學習。
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