范文:Modern Industry
「要求」
任何事物的發(fā)展都有兩面性――好的和壞的。現(xiàn)代工業(yè)的興起，一方面改善了人們的生活條件，另一方面卻危害了人們的生活環(huán)境。請你對此發(fā)表一下你的看法。
「范文」
Modern Industry
Modern industry has changed our way of life. In the past， we traveled form one place to another either on foot or on a horse's back， but now we go by bus， train or plane.
When I play with my cat， who knows whether I do not make her more sport than she makes me？
Modern industry also has seriously polluted our surroundings. Cars add much waste to the air that is already polluted by power and chemical plants.
These problems， however， can be solved through further industrial development. For example， we can use electricity and solar energy instead of coal. We believe a more advanced industry will certainly be more capable of taking care of its waste.
「評語」
本文成功地運用了例證的論述方法。每段第一句無疑是主題句，在其后緊跟一個使子進行解釋補充，一方面使文章敘議結(jié)合，另一方面增加了論點的說服力，使論證更加有效有力。
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