范文:Education 2
「要求」
請分別以下面三句話作為各段首的主題句，寫一篇題為“教育”的短文。
教育對建設(shè)一個(gè)富強(qiáng)的國家有著重要作用。
教育的宗旨不是為名圖利，而是有著更高遠(yuǎn)的目標(biāo)。
要促進(jìn)中國的教育，需做到以下幾點(diǎn)。
「范文」
Education
Education plays a vital role in building a powerful and prosperous country. A country full of illiterates would suffer from poverty and would have no escape from humiliation， as is the case with old China. Modern science and technology are progressing rapidly， and our country is in dire need of gifted persons. Only by developing education of the whole nation can we realize the four modernizations which would otherwise be an empty talk.
College education is much more than dancing or going on a picnic； there are lots of serious things to learn.
The aim of education is not set upon fame and riches； as a matter of fact， if aims at much more important goals. We go to school not for the purpose of gaining a diploma so as to make it easier to get employed and promoted for a bright career. Instead ，we go to school to acquire solid knowledge， to receive sound moral training， and to build up a strong body. Developing morally， intellectually and physically， we prepare ourselves for the future work to be assigned by the country.
Most problems can be lumped into three types： organizational， process， or cultural.
As to how to improve our education， several points should be made. First of all， we should teach people the fact that the development of our country relies on education. We should mobilize the whole nation to run all kinds of schools， to eliminate thoroughly the illiteracy of the country. What is more， actions should be taken to increase the education fund and to raise the teachers' salary and prestige.
「評語」
本篇為三段式的給出主題句作文。第一段的“no escape from”，“in dire need of”以及“Only by……”的倒裝句突出了教育的緊迫性和重要性。第二段用了三個(gè)不定式排比，后又以“morally”， “intellectually”和“physically”與“sound moral training”，“solid knowledge”和“a strong body”相呼應(yīng)，措辭講究，避免了重復(fù)。末段從思想上和物質(zhì)上對改進(jìn)教育提出了建議，三個(gè)“We should”的排比句增強(qiáng)了文章的力度。
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