四級寫作這次還是出得沒什么新意，還是結合生活的細節事情來命題，考“過度包裝”。其實這也怪不了命題的兄弟，畢竟四六級的命題也就是那些套路了，用多了，自然就很難再創新了。“過度包裝”這種現象可風倒是常常看到，例如朋友中秋送的月餅啊，那月餅盒包裝得比無比奢華，比骨灰盒還奢華。

命題還是按照“描述現象”“分析原因”“建議措施”這老掉牙的三板斧，盡管老套，那也是“斧斧”生輝。（突然看到韓國再次扣押我國漁船的新聞，先鄙視一下）考前的YY里已經把最有效的方式給了大家，就照寫吧（佛祖會保佑信文都的孩子的！）。昨天微博（新浪，騰訊）再次針對具體寫作的思路內容給出了建議，不負眾望，也有部分內容命中。

下面就結合考前給出的模式，加上考前預測內容，按照四級閱卷要求，寫一份符合四級閱卷要求的的考場參考文章，以供參考。

① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country.

② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers.

③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging.

① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.

③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.

④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon.

① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it.

② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.

③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging.

④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.

On Excessive Packaging

Wandering at the supermarkets, you could find that the shelves are filled with fancy and excessively-packaged goods with high price, especially when festivals approach. Although the government has much concerns over this issue, the phenomena are still common.

The reasons can be listed as follows. First, manufacturers could benefit from the over-packaging. Fancy packaging would increase the price to a large extent, from which they can earn more money. Secondly, some of the goods are brought and sent as gifts to our relatives and superiors. Gorgeously packaged gifts would be more attractive and add “face” to the one who buys and sends them.

From my point of view, excessive packaging is a waste of resources and money. Most people would throw the package away after they open it, which would lay heavier burden to our environment. To prevent this, every citizen should be aware of the problem, and strict laws must be made or reinforced to restrict the manufactures from excessive packaging.

【解析】

本次寫作延續了傳統的出題方式，即英文題目+ 中文解析，但同時也繼續了去年的一點小改動，對字數作了明確的限定。對于考生而言，商品過度包裝本身已是日常生活的熱點話題，大家比較熟悉，能有較多發揮空間。

在寫作過程當中，最重要的是要理清思路，將文章的邏輯關系理清。范文中，作者第一段描述了這一現象；第二段中，開篇便點出了主題，一目了然，列出了出現這一現象的原因；最后一段里，作者發表總結了自己的一些觀點。全文條理較為清晰。

其次，在句型方面，建議考生使用長短句交錯的方式，這樣節奏便較為明朗。

最后，用詞方面，文章對“過度包裝”使用了多種表達方式，如fancy packaging, luxurious packaging, glorious packaging等等。這樣文章便不會顯得“干燥”，讓閱卷老師懷疑你的詞匯量。因此，同學們在平時一定要注意同義詞、詞組的替換和使用。

On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays, the phenomenon of excessive packaging has becoming increasingly serious. Lots of packages have already deviated from their original function. Excessive packaging is a serious waste phenomenon, which deserves our special attention and penetrating research.

There are many reasons accounting for excessive packaging. Firstly, the promotion effects of excessive packaging have been greatly exaggerated by interest-driven merchants. Furthermore, it is irrational consumption that led to the phenomenon of excessive packaging. The last but not the least, as everyone sees it that distempered of the related laws and regulations and inadequate enforcement of the law together contributed to this phenomenon.

As far as I am concerned, excessive packaging not only creates waste of resources, but also causes unnecessary environment pollution, so we should try our best to eliminate this phenomenon completely. To avoid excessive packaging, we should increase our awareness of this phenomenon and change our ideas towards it. We should also establish the atmosphere of simple packaging, advocate appropriate packaging and build a conservation-minded society.

On Excessive Packaging

In recent years, with the economy growing, all kinds of goods are flowing into our life. The packaging of goods becomes more and more attracting our eyes. However, the problem of excessive packaging has aroused people’s wide concern.

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. For one thing, the business has seen through the mind of most consumers who are face-saving, for they thought that the more beautiful the packaging of goods is, the best people like. For another thing, excessive packaging can make the majority of merchants get high profit for the cheap commodity by improving price. Perhaps the primary reason lies that the form far outweighs the content.

In my opinion, it is more advisable to focus on the quality of goods than to decorate its appearance. So, it is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. Only in this way can we reduce unnecessary waste and have a rational and pure shopping condition, making our money cost worthwhile.

On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays, with the rapid development of national economy and elevation of cultural demands, more and more commodities with luxury packaging appear in stores or supermarkets. Lots of people select these commodities to present as gifts to bosses, friends or relatives at festivals.

This phenomenon, which resulted by several factors, arouses hot discussions among people. One of these reasons is the psychology of extravagance-showing among people of all ranks. They tend to feel inferior if their presents look common and simple. On the other hand, lots of merchants, out of the consideration of their commercial profits, use all their efforts to promote their goods, which need to be luxuriously packaged as to meet the demands of market. Last but not the least, some people select these over packaging commodities to please their bosses in order to get a promotion.

Overall, this phenomenon is an outcome of the market economy. It can promote the development of economy, but, at the same time, leads to the corruption of social morality. We should take all measures to reduce the production of these commodities as to control social environment.

On Excessive Packaging

I assume that you are familiar with the phenomenon of “Excessive Packaging”. Taking a look around，we can find examples with ease：a small computer is packed in a thick and heavycarton，clothes are putted in a well-designed plastic bagsand moon-cakes are usually placed in delicate boxes.

What are the causes of this problem? On the one hand, to earn more economic gains, a considerable number of manufactures usually wrap their products with unnecessary but appealing materials aiming at attracting customer’s attention , arousing their curiosity and then stimulating their purchasing desire. On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the more delicate the package seems，the superior the quality will be,the notion has also encouraged the trend of excessive packaging.

To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to impose restriction onexcessive packaging. Moreover, a public education campaign should be launched to arouse customers' consciousness that packaging doesn't equal to quality. Only in this way can we put an end to this trend. (185words)

中文譯文：

我覺得你應該對"商品過度包裝"現象也不陌生。在我們生活的周圍，我們隨處可見這樣的例子：小電腦包裝在一個又厚又重的紙板盒里，衣服包裝在設計精美的塑料袋里，月餅通常也放在精致的包裝盒里。

這個問題的原因到底是什么？ 首先，很多制造商為了獲得

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