2012年12月22日四級真題點評解析

　　2012年12月22日，在世界本應該“末日”之后的第一天，九百多萬中國的年輕人，在這寒冷冬天的清晨，邁進了四、六級考場，開始了他們對于“末日”的又一場“戰爭”！
　　然而這場戰爭，并不那么容易取得勝利，很多人在看到作文題目的那一瞬間，他們的心都停止了，都粉碎了——只因為，曾幾何時，他們過于相信某些人類的相關“押題”，導致的是自己根本沒有實際的動腦并且動手去寫上些作文，去掌握些句子，去運用寫段落！
　　而，我在考前的最后提高公開課程中，明確說過，不要“押題”，押不中失常，押上了，但是沒背，只能崩潰！
　　我也說過，希望大家明白“任你幾路來，我只一路去”的寫作王道，即不論出題人怎么變化，我們都只寫自己的作文，讓他琢磨去吧。我們也要注意今年的作文題目，在此，筆者使用自己之前在網上已經公布的作文模版來實際書寫一下這次四級作文的題目，以驗證我所說的寫作“王道”。
　　在對比過程之中，紅色為現場添加，藍色為主題或圖片內容，黑色為原有內容。
　　寫作一步一定項審題：
　　主題：Education Pays
　　第一段：引入現象
　　As we can see from the picture that nowadays, the phenomenon of Education Pays has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people’s future. Especially to the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to put the pays to the first place but not the degree, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their present career and may even endanger futures.
     第二段第一種：現象原因
　　Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays，the following one might be the most critical .For the majority of young people, they have been always considering the education as a bothering thing to do or not a opportunity that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.So,they want to get a job as early as possible.But, as matter of fact, as the picture described, the people who have learned more earn more than others And,in the picture, the ones who have the doctoral degree earn more XXXX than the ones who have only a degree as bachelor.

　　第二段第二種：現象討論
　　Does anyone maintain the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely not，as a matter of fact，opinions vary from person to person. Some argue that Education Pays is beneficial to doctors, because, by this way,they can earn mare money. However ，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that Education Pays is detrimental to the ones who learn the skills through hard works.But,most of people agree that the demerits of less education far outweigh its merits
　　第三段：個人對策
　　To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over it.And，it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to tell the young people the fact about the Education Pays. With this measure taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.

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Education Pay
     What is shown in the chart above is that those people with high degree earn more than those with lower. For example, staff with master’s degree receive a better payment than those with bachelor’s degree, according to a survey of the payment to the employee. These survey indicates that education degree does have a relationship with earnings, contrary to the recent theory of useless education.
     Recently, there is a heated discussion about the significance of the education. Some people hold a view that higher education is useless since college education cannot mesh with the social needs. Some think that higher education is indispensable if you want to go far in both your studies and life. Now that survey has proved which part is wiser.
　　As for me, I definitely support the view that education is necessary for people’s life. Reading can not only make me survive well in this society with fierce competition but also help me make sense of life. I pursue for it for my whole life.

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　　Pays corresponds to education levels, as is demonstrated by the chart above, “Education: A Weekly Investment”. The weekly earnings in 2010 increases with the sort of diploma the person holds. For instance, the college students with no degree get paid $712 per week whereas those with a Bachelor’s degree can earn 50% more than them.

　　Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to account for this phenomenon. To begin with, compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which are essential to a high-income work. Also, the higher one’s education degree is the bigger platform he will have to show his ability. For example, his college, university, or research institute will organize various job fairs for them to communicate face to face with employers.

　　This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment, therefore, substantial education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to build our country and strive for a better life for ourselves.

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　　2012年12月英語四級答案考試作文范文高分版，考完試的同學可以對比一下自己的考場作文，備考的同學也可以研究一下考題。希望大家四級考試順利通過。
　　Does a degree alone pay off?
　　Judging from the table, we can see that people’s income increases along with their education levels. Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates.
　　The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don’t think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career path.
　　In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduate’s ability and learning habit.

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     From the bar chart given above, we can observe that it reflects the statistics of income among people of different educational background. Those who possess a doctoral degree earn 1,551dollars median weekly, ranking first among people of other education level. The median weekly earnings of people with associate degree and below cannot reach the average of 797 dollars, ranking from 768 dollars to 451 dollars. As for the unemployment rate, 2.5 % of people with doctoral degree will suffer form unemployment. However, the unemployment rate of people with some college, no degree and lower degree surpass the mean value of 7.6%, ranking from 8.7% to 14.1%.
　　The bar chart of Education Pays reveals a phenomenon that there exits some difference in incomes and unemployment rate among people with different educational level. Quite a few reasons can account for this phenomenon: for one thing, with the advancement of technology and the adjustment of industrial structure, quite a few high-tech industries emerge overnight, which leads to a soar demand of workforces with high educational degree, thus, it is natural that graduates with bachelor’ and higher degree get a high pay-packet and enjoy a stable job. Additionally, those with educational background under associate degree are easily dismissed and paid by low salary. They can be replaced any time due to the fact that their jobs are easy and can be finished by average people.
　　Definitely, the higher education degree you get, the more likely you are to enjoy a competitive edge in the employment market. Thus, the authorities should enforce some policies to ensure the equity of education. Only in this way can more people lead a stable and comfortable life.

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