英語四級8分作文修改1
英語四級待批改作文：
In everyday life,we will come across various things and people.There is no doubt that most of them are good,but in some cases,we will see some immoral behaviors.
A few days ago,when I was in a bus to a supermarket,there was a girl who was eating something.And when she finished,she threw the packing bag out of window.I was shocked of her behavior.The packing bag would not only pollute the environment but also cause danger to the cars passing that road.
However,this is just one of my experience.In fact,there are lots of immoral behaviors in our daily life which have some bad effects.Firstly,it will make us unpleasant.Moreover,it will either pollute the environment or disturb the order of society.
If we want to improve this condition,we can appeal people not to do the immoral things and put some signs in the public area.Most importantly,we shouid remember that it is every indivisual's duty to make our society better and better.
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