2012年12月四級考試寫作備考筆記(7)
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Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.
There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.
支持段的分論點:
?、?方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.
?、?舒適 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.
?、?炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.
否定段的主題句:① However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.
?、?While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.
③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects
④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.
?、?However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.
?、?Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that......
⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.
⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.
否定段的分論點:
?、?占有空間 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.
?、?交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.
?、?污染環(huán)境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.
注意:所謂上義詞是指抽象、概括和籠統(tǒng)的,就是比較superordinate的詞;而下義詞就是具體的東西,即subordinate的東西。
第四段(總結(jié)段)的寫法:
?、?Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.
② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.
③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.
?、?Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.
選擇題型變體邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)(My View on Sth.)
選擇性觀點的變體的文章寫作邏輯結(jié)構(gòu):
Paragraph I:(1)引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點; (2)簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。
Paragraph II:(1)提出作者觀點(本文主題句);
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