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　　（2）舉例加以論證。

　　Paragraph III:（1）總結全文（再次強調作者觀點）

　　范文17. My View on Fate

　　There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.

　　注：1. consensus 相同意見

　　2. 第一句話可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.

　　3. while 輕微轉折和對比，強轉折用詞but, however 4. master 主人

　　As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands. In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have. We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.

　　注：1. 第一句as far as與I agree重復，把后半句改為the latter opinion seems more reasonable。

　　2. architect 建筑師，archor 弓箭手

　　3. In fact 前后是轉折關系，之前從正面闡述，之后從反面闡述

　　范文17. My View on Fate （續）

　　Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.

　　注：1. 本段開始舉例

　　2. Let's take……for example 中間是插入語，表示強調，舉例不宜太長。

　　In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”

　　注：bear sth. in mind：把……牢記在心

　　范文13. The Way to Success

　　第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.

　　II、社會熱點話題寫作邏輯結構

　　Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要評論的事物或觀點（general）；

　　(2) 具體描述這個事物或者觀點（或者是我對這個現象/ 事物的基本看法specific）。

　　Paragraph 2: (1) 作者對該現象貨問題的基本看法，即文章的論點句；

　　(2) 支持性的細節分論點（至少兩點）；

　　(3) 本段總結（可以省略）。

　　Paragraph 3: (1) 總結全文，定下結論（通常為我的對策或看法）。

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