2012年12月英語四級考試作文點評:運用模板
2012年12月22日，在世界本應該“末日”之后的第一天，九百多萬中國的年輕人，在這寒冷冬天的清晨，邁進了四、六級考場，開始了他們對于“末日”的又一場“戰爭”!
然而這場戰爭，并不那么容易取得勝利，很多人在看到作文題目的那一瞬間，他們的心都停止了，都粉碎了——只因為，曾幾何時，他們過于相信某些人類的相關“押題”，導致的是自己根本沒有實際的動腦并且動手去寫上些作文，去掌握些句子，去運用寫段落!
而，我在考前的最后提高公開課程中，明確說過，不要“押題”，押不中失常，押上了，但是沒背，只能崩潰!
我也說過，希望大家明白“任你幾路來，我只一路去”的寫作王道，即不論出題人怎么變化，我們都只寫自己的作文，讓他琢磨去吧。我們也要注意今年的作文題目，在此，筆者使用自己之前在網上已經公布的作文模版來實際書寫一下這次四級作文的題目，以驗證我所說的寫作“王道”。
在對比過程之中，紅色為現場添加，藍色為主題或圖片內容，黑色為原有內容。
寫作一步一定項審題：
主題：Education Pays
第一段：引入現象
As we can see from the picture that nowadays, the phenomenon of Education Pays has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people’s future. Especially to the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to put the pays to the first place but not the degree, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their present career and may even endanger futures. 第二段第一種：現象原因
Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays，the following one might be the most critical .For the majority of young people, they have been always considering the education as a bothering thing to do or not a opportunity that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.So,they want to get a job as early as possible.But, as matter of fact, as the picture described, the people who have learned more earn more than others And,in the picture, the ones who have the doctoral degree earn more XXXX than the ones who have only a degree as bachelor.
第二段第二種：現象討論
Does anyone maintain the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely noxt，as a matter of fact，opinions vary from person to person. Some argue that Education Pays is beneficial to doctors, because, by this way,they can earn mare money. However ，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that Education Pays is detrimental to the ones who learn the skills through hard works.But,most of people agree that the demerits of less education far outweigh its merits
第三段：個人對策
To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over it.And，it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to tell the young people the fact about the Education Pays. With this measure taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.
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