2017年12月英語四級高分范文（十八）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Commercialization of Campus Music. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年來校園音樂逐漸走向商業化，由企業發起主辦的大學生音樂節、校園歌手大賽層出不窮2)導致這種現象的原因是什么3)這種現象可能帶來的影響
【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析導致這種現象的原因，提綱第3點要求說明該現象可能帶來的影響，由此可推知本文應為現象解釋型作文。根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述近年來企業熱衷于舉辦大學生音樂節、校園歌手大賽的現象;分析導致這種現象的原因;說明該現象可能帶來的影響。
【參考范文】Commercialization of Campus Music
In recent years, campus music has been commercialized gradually. More and more enterprises are interested in being the sponsors of college music festivals or award competitions of campus singers. Campus singers and songs are not confined to college campus any more but being pushed to the market gradually。
The following factors can account for this phenomenon. On the one hand, some enterprises’ paying more attention to campus music is out of their sense of commitment to the society. They want to set healthy enterprise images before the public. On the other hand, nowadays entertainment marketing is very popular. Enterprises want to utilize entertainment activities to improve their notability and influence. College students, as the focus of the whole society, are a good choice for these enterprises. Of course, these musical activities have brought more chances for campus singers to show their talents to the public. Besides, campus songs have gotten more wide spreading. However, commercialization of campus music to some extent reduces its uniqueness. Induced by fame and wealth, some campus singers try to cater to the tastes of the public and lost their own styles gradually。
Therefore, in order to make campus music develop more healthily, both the sponsors of music activities and our campus singers should pay more attention on music itself but not profits。
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