四六級高分范文：Road Accidents

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Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic：Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)交通事故會給人們的生命和財產(chǎn)帶來很大的損失
2)分析交通事故發(fā)生的主要原因
3)如何降低交通事故發(fā)生率

關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文-行文思路

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因;說明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。

【高分范文】

Road Accidents

Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.

[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.

[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.

關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文【亮點點評】
[1]插入語，as意為“作為”。
[2]表遞進。
[3]用于引出原因。
[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[5]“增加了…的機會或可能性”。
[6]“監(jiān)管不力”，weak的使用準確地道。
[7]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。
[8]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時候了”。
[9]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。

關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文-佳句臨摹

1.佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.
臨摹：一些人失敗后可能會變得灰心喪氣，甚至?xí)艞壋晒Φ南Ｍ?
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2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.
臨摹：許多學(xué)生認為考取

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