四六級高分范文：Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)隨著人們生活水平的提高，一些人認為勤儉節約的生活方式已經過時了
2)但是很多人反對這種說法
3)你的看法是…，為什么?
【行文思路 】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一種觀點，提綱第2點提出另外一種相反的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談“我”的觀點，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：提出第1種觀點：節儉和樸素的生活方式已經過時了，并說明理由;提出第2種觀點：勤儉節約仍然是一種美德，并說明理由;表明“我”對節儉的看法，并說明理由。
【高分范文】
Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?
With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style [2]and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.
[3]However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn’t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited [2]and some of them even are [4]on the decline. [5]Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.
[6]As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe [7] “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is [8]not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. [5]In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. [5]Besides, there are still millions of Chinese [9]living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. [5]Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.
【亮點點評】
[1]“不再”。
[2]表示遞進。
[3]引出另外一種觀點。
[4]“在下降”。
[5]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[6]用于引出自己的觀點或選擇。
[7]引用諺語“儉以防匱”。
[8]not... but連接并列結構，意為“不是…而是”。
[9]現在分詞短語作后置定語。
[10]“毫無疑問”。
關于勤儉節約的英語作文-佳句臨摹
1.佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline.
臨摹：車禍使人們的財產遭受極大的損失，甚至還奪走了無數人的生命。
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2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.
臨摹：我們永遠都不應該低估自己的能力，而應該相信一句諺語：“有志者，事竟成。”
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【KEY】
1. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to people’s properties and even taken away thousands of people’s lives.
2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
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