2017年12月英語六級寫作真題解析：尊重
2017年12月六級寫作真題解析：尊重
上海新東方學校 陸振輝
六級寫作(第一套)
Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Respect others, and you will be respected.” You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
本次六級寫作考題中規中矩，考核以名言警句為核心主題的議論文，難度一般。
在審題時，首先找到核心主題“Respect others, and you will be respected.”-尊重別人，你也將受到尊重。同時關注題目要求“cite examples to illustrate your views”在文章當中要以例子附證你的觀點。
那么首先在布局謀篇上，同學們可參考議論文的三段式格式進行寫作：首段引出核心觀點詞：respect。中間段落做舉例論證，論述respect的重要性，或者respect給我們帶來的好處，加以例子作論據。最后一段總結觀點即可。
例文：
“Respect others, and you will be respected.” This proverb subtly conveys the notion about the importance of respect, which forms the basis of moral cultivation. In other words, the feeling of respect is actually mutual.
第一段可以這樣改寫一下：
“Respect others, and you will be respected.” This proverb subtly conveys the notion that respect is actually mutual and rewarding. As the core of moral cultivation, respect is of great significance and may exert a long-lasting impact on interpersonal contact.
A number of factors can be accountable for this saying. On the one hand, respect brings us closer as it shows that we care about the feelings of others. Only through being respectful can we feel the kindness and love expressed by people around you. On the other hand, mutual respect brings us to a harmonious world. In a society in which the differences between us are easier to spot than the similarities, achieving mutual respect is not just a matter of importance, but of necessity. For instance, when conducting business with people from other countries, it would be impossible for us to hold the same idea on every issue. However, a common ground can be reached when we put aside our differences and be respectful to each other.
From what has been discussed above, the significance of mutual respect is evident. Not only does it help narrow the distance in human interactions, but it also contributes to the building of a harmonious world.(197 words)
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