高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文名師點(diǎn)評(píng)(十二)

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　　2015年高考正在緊張的備考階段，高考英語(yǔ)的學(xué)習(xí)依然至關(guān)重要，不僅靠知識(shí)的積累和運(yùn)用，同時(shí)也需要學(xué)習(xí)的方法和做題的技巧，為了幫助廣大考生攻克高考英語(yǔ)的學(xué)習(xí)，高考網(wǎng)為大家整理了高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)資料和解題技巧，以下是《高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文名師點(diǎn)評(píng)(十二)》，供考生們參考學(xué)習(xí)。

　　作文題目

　　假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來(lái)信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫(huà)提供的信息，寫(xiě)信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

　　注意：1、詞數(shù)：100左右;2、參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).

　　作品一：

　　I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

　　Hope you will come here soon!

　　All the best!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　滿(mǎn)分理由

　　本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用，還使用了以‘which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。

　　作品二：

　　Dear Bob,

　　Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

　　I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

　　Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport,see you.

　　Best wishes !

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　滿(mǎn)分理由

　　本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。

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