高考英語作文指導(dǎo)與基礎(chǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)(第一講)
2014年高考英語考試已經(jīng)結(jié)束,新一輪的高考復(fù)習(xí)又將開始。面臨2015年高考,考生應(yīng)該如何復(fù)習(xí)高考英語這個考試科目呢?高考網(wǎng)匯總整理《高考英語作文指導(dǎo)與基礎(chǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)(第一講)》,供2015年高考考生參考。
第一講 記敘文:如何寫人
一、寫作指導(dǎo)
高考英語基礎(chǔ)寫作中的寫人側(cè)重人物的介紹,可以用第一人稱(如寫求職信),也可以用第三人稱,時態(tài)常常用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,具體的人稱和時態(tài)要依據(jù)寫作的要求來確定。寫作過程中要注意以下幾個方面的問題:
1.人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長、事跡、性格等多個方面,但英語基礎(chǔ)寫作需要嚴(yán)格按照寫作要求來寫,包括所給的全部信息點,既不能遺漏,也不能隨意添加。
2.對題目所給的信息要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)重組,安排好寫作順序,突出重點信息。重點信息通常是寫作的目的所在,比如求職要重點突出學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷,新聞報道要重點突出事跡,介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點,等等。
3.正確運(yùn)用描寫人物的詞匯和句型。
4.注意運(yùn)用正確的時態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時,而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過去時。
二、常用詞語
外貌特征:beautiful, big nose, black eyes,fat, good-looking,handsome, healthy, near-sighted,ordinary-looking, pretty,short,strong, tall, thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, etc.
性格特點:absent-minded, attractive,bad-tempered,be ready to help others, bright,charming,confident, diligent,friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous,independent, kind, kind-hearted,lazy,narrow-minded, naughty,patient,think of others, smart,talkative, warm-hearted,wise,etc.
出生年齡:a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.
興趣愛好:be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.
教育背景: be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in class,when at college, etc.
經(jīng)歷事跡: become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’s life for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to do sth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.
他人評價:an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.
三、實例分析
【例1】 李華自我介紹
假設(shè)你是李華,申請到一家外資企業(yè)工作,你需要用英文給人事部經(jīng)理寫一封信,介紹自己的基本情況,簡介信包括下表所列內(nèi)容:
姓名 李華 出生年月 1981年8月
出生地 廣東省佛山市
學(xué)歷 1994—2000 佛山第一中學(xué)
2000—2004 大學(xué)計算機(jī)系
2004—至今 在一家計算機(jī)公司工作
所學(xué)主要課程 計算機(jī)、中文、數(shù)學(xué)、英語、體育
特長愛好 游泳(曾獲得過大學(xué)游泳比賽一等獎),音樂
寫作要求:
1. 簡介必須包括以上全部內(nèi)容(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好);
2. 使用5個句子。
Dear Manager,
I am waiting for your reply.
Thank you.
Yours Truly,
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo):
文體 記敘文,用第一人稱
信息組織 ①寫信目的,到貴公司工作;②姓名、出生地點、日期; ③學(xué)習(xí)簡歷;④學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容,現(xiàn)在情況;⑤愛好和特長
時態(tài) 現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時,一般過去時
參考范文:
Dear Manager,
I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years. I studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E, and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition. I am waiting for your reply.
Thank you.
Yours Truly,
Li Hua
【例 2】介紹姚明和劉翔
假設(shè)你是李華,正在美國參加學(xué)習(xí),課堂上老師要求你簡要介紹我國的名人,你選擇了姚明和劉翔,兩位體育明星,他們的基本情況如下:
姓名 姚明 劉翔
出生 1980年,上海 1983年,上海
事跡 世界著名籃球運(yùn)動員,現(xiàn)在美國NBA火箭隊效力,球隊主力隊員之一,多次進(jìn)入美國全明星隊。 多次獲得世界110米欄冠軍,2004年雅典奧運(yùn)會冠軍,不久以后還打破了世界記錄。
愛好 聽流行音樂 音樂,唱歌
寫作要求:
1. 簡介必須包括以上全部內(nèi)容(開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好);
2. 使用5個句子。
3. 參考詞匯:火箭隊 Rocket, 110米欄110-metre hurdling,雅典奧運(yùn)會——the Athens Olympic Games
Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.
____________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
寫作指導(dǎo):
文體 記敘文,用第三人稱
信息組織 有兩條線索:一是分別對比兩人的各項情況,二是先介紹姚明,再介紹劉翔。第二條線索比較好。
①姚明,籃球運(yùn)動員,出生;②主力隊員,明星隊; ③劉翔,110米欄世界冠軍;④04雅典冠軍,打破記錄;⑤兩人的愛好。
時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時,一般過去時
參考例文:
Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music whilst Liu Xiang likes singing.
四、即時練習(xí)
1. 介紹同學(xué)
假設(shè)你是李華,學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英文版通訊員,最近學(xué)校網(wǎng)站準(zhǔn)備宣傳一些優(yōu)秀學(xué)生,請你用英文為李敏同學(xué)寫一篇簡介,李敏同學(xué)的基本情況如下:
姓名 李敏 職務(wù) 高二(1)班班長
特點 健康、活潑 愛好 體育活動,唱歌跳舞
事跡 她各科成績都好,但她剛進(jìn)校時,英語學(xué)習(xí)有困難,經(jīng)過努力,成績上去了。2006年參加全國物理奧林匹克競賽并獲得一等獎。她嚴(yán)于律己,樂于助人。
寫作要求:
1. 簡介必須包括以上全部內(nèi)容;
2. 版面有限,只能使用5個句子。
寫作指導(dǎo):
文體 記敘文,用第三人稱
信息組織 ①姓名、職務(wù)、特點;②愛好、成績; ③英語學(xué)習(xí)困難;④04物理竟賽;⑤她的品格
時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時,一般過去時
2. 介紹兩位年輕人
假設(shè)你是李華,正在倫敦的一條街上購物,突然有兩個年輕人匆匆走過,引起了你的注意,你就向不遠(yuǎn)處的一位警察反映,正好他在尋找兩名小偷,他請你書面描述一下那兩位年輕人的特征,你所看到的基本情況如下:
年輕人之一 年輕人之二
身高 約1.90米 約1.65米
長相 高鼻子,大嘴巴,禿頭 小鼻子,小眼睛,卷頭發(fā)
衣著 藍(lán)上衣,舊皮鞋 黑色的褲子,運(yùn)動鞋
神色 匆匆忙忙,四處張望,每人手上都拿著一個塑料袋。
逃離方向 沿著這條街,在紅燈處左拐彎。
寫作要求:
1. 書面描述必須包括以上全部內(nèi)容;
2. 使用5個句子。
參考詞匯:禿頭 bald head ,卷頭發(fā) curly hair
寫作指導(dǎo):
文體 記敘文,用第三人稱,側(cè)重描寫這兩個人的外表特征。
信息組織 信息組織可以有兩條線索,一是分別逐項對比,二是先描述一個,再描述另一個。選擇第一種比較容易辨別。
①身高對比;②長相對比; ③衣著對比;④神色;⑤方向
時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時,現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時,一般過去時,現(xiàn)在完成時
參考范文
1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help other people.
2. One is about 1.90 metres tall, and the other is only about 1.65 metres, quite short. The taller has a big nose, a big mouth and a bald head, whilst the shorter one has a small nose, small eyes and curly hair. The taller is wearing a blue jacket, a pair of old shoes, and the shorter is wearing black trousers with sports shoes. Each of them took a plastic bag in their hands while going in a hurry and looked around sometimes. They ran away down his street and turned left at the red light.
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