【雅思寫作妙招】案例講解如何讓雅思作文多樣化
在雅思考試中,大多數中國學生最擔心的就是寫作了,很多同學在寫作上投入精力最多,耗時最長,但收效甚微,其實這往往和學生備考方式不當有一定的關心。雅思作文欄目雅思考試高分學員alina分享了她的雅思作文心得。她認為,一篇好文章的條件很多,除了內容豐富外,同一件事,用不同的表達,其結果也是不同。
如果在雅思作文中清一色的使用簡單句、長句,那文章必定會比較乏味。最好的方法是以簡單句為基礎,配合適當的并列句和復雜句。簡單句可長可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語,以及節縮成分。下面分析這五種表達,雖然是一個意思,但是句式不同,重點也會有些差別。
1.The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter.
2.Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter.
3.In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter.
4.There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter.
5.As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter.
其中,第一種和第五種句式最為常見,如果在這種基礎上,再用其它三種互相替換,效果不是更好嗎?
下面是我總結的一些常用形容詞,在文章中也可以適當的進行一些形容詞的變化:
貧窮的:poor=needy=impoverished=poverty-stricken
積極的,好的:good=conducive=beneficial=advantageous
消極的,不良的:bad=detrimental=baneful=undesirable
明顯的:obvious=apparent=evident=manifest
健康的:healthy=robust=sound=wholesome
驚人的:surprising=amazing=extraordinary=miraculous
美麗的:beautiful=attractive=gorgeous=eye-catching
有活力的:energetic=dynamic=vigorous=animated
引起:cause=trigger=endanger
解決:solve=resolve=address=tackle=cope with=deal with
拆除:destroy=tear down=knock down=eradicate
培養:develop=cultivate=foster=nurture
激發,鼓勵:encourage=motivate=stimulate=spur
完成:complete=fulfill=accomplish=achieve
保留:keep=preserve=retain=hold
有害于:destroy=impair=undermine=jeopardize
減輕:ease=alleviate=relieve=lighten
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