實例講解雅思寫作開頭技巧 一個主題7種寫法
Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world, it would be a more peaceful world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give an example to support your idea.
上面是一篇雅思寫作的題目，今天，小站就利用這個題目來分別講解一下各種不同的開頭寫作技巧，從低分到高分，從簡單高復雜，考生也可以了解一下，自己的開頭和高分比起來，差距到底在哪里。
模式一： 3句式 rephrase the title + quote others' opinions + make one's own point clear
如果用一個好的句式，則可以寫成：Recently there has been a hot debate in the public over the issue whether the world would be more peace if women governed the world.
如果用動詞變化和連詞連接觀點，則可以寫成：Some people believe that women would be better governors while other people couldn't agree.
如果選擇常規的提出自己的觀點，如果現在還沒有明確的觀點，可以課程：I will analyze the two opinions and then give my own point of view.
模式二：可以從world governor 或者man/ woman作為切入點，避免直接談到話題，而是“后退一步”從話題的部分內容中切入，如：
It's generally agreed that women are more considerate and patient than men. However, would the world be more peaceful if women were the governor of the world? Personally, I believe that women are better governors than men.
Undoubtedly, women and men should be treated equally. However, when it comes to governing the world, it seems that most of the governors are males just as the word "history" indicates history is "his story", not "her story". In my point of view, women would make better governors if given the chance.
模式三：可以考慮拋開背景知識，采用其他的開篇手法，雖然難度可能更大一點。
At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturally form an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun always shines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.
Have you ever considered why the world should be governed by males most of the time? Has it ever occurred to you that women might make more competent leaders and the world would be more peaceful under their leadership? I sincerely believe that women could at least make equally capable leaders as men if not better.
Sometimes while looking back on the trip, one may find that seemingly the road has always been bumpy and muddy and sadly the driver has been a man most of the time. Some people may therefore come to a misunderstanding that it is the man driver who has made the voyage uncomfortable and even miserable. It is the same case when it comes to the human being's history. I sincerely believe that whether the society is more violent and conflicting may not have a close relationship with the gender of the leader.
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