雅思寫(xiě)作5.5分魔咒的2大原因及對(duì)策
編者按:看到網(wǎng)上一篇不錯(cuò)的雅思名師關(guān)于雅思寫(xiě)作的心得分享,所以跟大家分享一些雅思寫(xiě)作備考方法,希望幫助烤鴨們走出5.5分魔咒,獲得高分。雅思作文涉及到很多方面,下面是大家問(wèn)得最多的兩個(gè)問(wèn)題:
1. 關(guān)于模板:
雅思寫(xiě)作能否用模板得高分?學(xué)員們的成績(jī)說(shuō)明,模板可保證5或5.5分甚至偶爾6分,但絕對(duì)會(huì)制約你得6.5分及以上的高分。什么是模板?大家對(duì)下面這種中國(guó)人慣用的開(kāi)頭段方式不會(huì)陌生吧: With the development of technology, …plays an important role in our life and arouses heated debate. Some people think…, others think…, I think….這就是最惡俗的制約我們得6分以上分?jǐn)?shù)的開(kāi)頭段模板。我們對(duì)比一下考官在劍8里寫(xiě)的滿分開(kāi)頭段:
題目1:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官范文開(kāi)頭段
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents only.
顯然,考官?zèng)]使用以上我提到的世間最惡俗的寫(xiě)法。
我們?cè)賮?lái)看一篇考官在劍5里面寫(xiě)的滿分作文的開(kāi)頭段。
題目2:
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
考官范文開(kāi)頭段
Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.
縱觀劍3-8上考官給出的滿分范文,考官開(kāi)頭段的風(fēng)格永遠(yuǎn)都是針對(duì)題目中一兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行背景拓展,甚至加上自己的一些和題目相關(guān)的一些發(fā)揮,簡(jiǎn)練(一般3句左右)而直逼核心內(nèi)容,不會(huì)說(shuō)一大堆沒(méi)有營(yíng)養(yǎng)的空話套話。
我對(duì)于模板的態(tài)度一直很鮮明:一切以實(shí)戰(zhàn)需要為準(zhǔn),不說(shuō)空話。每個(gè)考生的英語(yǔ)功底都是不同的,英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)好,有實(shí)力原創(chuàng)的同學(xué)考前不需要準(zhǔn)備固定的套路,而應(yīng)該把時(shí)間用在研究真題和范文上;
而對(duì)于確實(shí)沒(méi)有能力原創(chuàng)太多的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)(有些死孩紙完全靠自己實(shí)力寫(xiě)出來(lái)的文章真的是令人心碎惆悵),如果不事先準(zhǔn)備好邏輯框架,在考試中真就有可能寫(xiě)不出來(lái),字?jǐn)?shù)不夠或者邏輯顛三倒四。所以模板因人而異,少用精用而不濫用。
2. 關(guān)于語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量:
不僅雅思寫(xiě)作,所有的寫(xiě)作都包括在內(nèi),都不需要用特別變態(tài)特別難特別生僻的詞匯。有的烤鴨有這樣一個(gè)誤區(qū),那就是我把單詞寫(xiě)難了大家都不認(rèn)識(shí)我就能得高分了。
試想一下:我們?cè)谘潘紝?xiě)作中會(huì)用到諸如糖尿病腦血栓等這樣的專業(yè)大詞嗎?有個(gè)孩子以前在雅思作文中寫(xiě)出神經(jīng)元的分解,當(dāng)時(shí)我一下就崩潰了。雅思寫(xiě)作不是考察用詞的難度,而是指用詞的有效性,包括準(zhǔn)確度,新穎度,靈活度,所以我們針對(duì)這種情況會(huì)專門總結(jié)一些寫(xiě)作詞匯。
比如“教育”這個(gè)詞,我們都會(huì)用education這個(gè)詞,但是更高級(jí)更易得分的寫(xiě)法就是這樣寫(xiě):schooling---學(xué)校教育,parenting---家長(zhǎng)教育,這就是更容易得分的寫(xiě)法了。再比如“心理健康”這個(gè)詞,我們都會(huì)用mental health,更容易得分的寫(xiě)法是psychological soundness。在我們的課程中會(huì)專門有總結(jié)。
還是回到考官范文。縱覽考官范文,他們都不會(huì)用難詞大詞怪詞偏詞,但是通過(guò)多變的句式和亮點(diǎn)詞組會(huì)讓文章變得非常耐看。這種詞匯我們上課會(huì)有專門的歸類總結(jié),同學(xué)們也可以自己整理。我一直告訴我的學(xué)生:背誦借鑒和模仿是提高寫(xiě)作能力最快和最佳的途徑。建議大家把喜歡的篇章、段落、句式、詞匯摘抄到一個(gè)本上,通過(guò)不斷翻閱增加記憶。
以上即是小站雅思頻道與大家分享的一篇名師講解破除雅思5.5分魔咒的經(jīng)驗(yàn)談,希望能有所幫助,祝早日與雅思分手。
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