雅思寫作7分之路第一站——引人入勝的導入段的多重寫法
首先國際慣例,分析一下雅思大作文的基本樣式,如果不了解的話,請速速對照各種高分范文比較學習。
?單邊支持/反對 ?探討雙方?陳述利弊 ?半支持半反對?分析解決 ?多重選擇
構成:引言段 + 主體段 + 結(jié)論段
一、引言段
組成:開頭句(Opening sentence)+ 中心論點 步驟:引入話題,同義轉(zhuǎn)述,再根據(jù)寫作任務表達中心論點
I、Opening sentence 五種方法:
(一)、引人入勝 思路:用一個比較有趣的話題先吊起考官的胃口,并吸引他們往下看
題目 1:Many schools demand the students to wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality.
范文:
The issue of whether the practice of requiring students to wear
school uniforms will affect their personality and individuality is of great interest to many people.
備選:
Be of great concern for many parents
?引起父母的關注
Be of great importance to many scientists
?對科學家來說至關重要
Be of great significance to both A and B
?對于 A 和 B 都是非常重要的
題目 2.:人類如何定義和追求幸福,這樣的問題引起公眾廣泛的爭議。 范文:
The question of how human beings can define and pursue happiness is a matter of much contention among the general public.
備選:
The question of _____________ has been widely debate in the world of politics.
(二)、力排眾議 思路:先駁斥大眾的某個普遍但卻錯誤的觀念,指出其與現(xiàn)實不符,然后提出自己的想法 或正確想法,并在主體段列舉各種理由、證據(jù)以及活生生和例子來論證。
套路:Although it is + 副詞 + 過去分詞 + that ?.,this is ?....
題目 1:The older generations have very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life.
范文 1:
Although it is commonly believed that conventional views about a healthy lifestyle and proper conduct are no longer to young people’s needs today, this is actually not the case.
題目 2:越來越少人照看年老的親屬,而是把他們送到專業(yè)人士那邊去。
范文 2:Although many people subscribe to the belief that their old relatives can be taken better care of in a nursing home, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view,
it is the younger family members who should really be responsible for looking after these old people during the rest of their lives.
釋義: ①普遍認為?,但事實并非如下。
Although it is commonly believed that ?, this is actually not the case.
②許多人認同這樣的觀點?,但事實上這卻是一種我們需要去澄清的普遍錯誤觀念。 Although many people subscribe to the belief that ?., this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up.
③大眾觀念認為?.,但是現(xiàn)實狀況卻遠比這種觀念復雜得多。
Although conventional wisdom has it that?., the reality of the situation is often far more complicated than that.
釋義:
subscribe to 訂閱、同意、預訂 conventional wisdom大眾觀念
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