雅思寫作水平提升的語(yǔ)法修煉課之動(dòng)詞篇
雅思寫作是極難的，要提高也是極不容易的，6分是一個(gè)大檻，大部分烤鴨會(huì)被卡于此。而以上，每0.5分都是一個(gè)不小的檻。雅思寫作分?jǐn)?shù)低是很多雅思考生心中永遠(yuǎn)的痛 。本文將聚焦于造成普遍低分的最重要原因之一——語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題，為大家梳理一下最常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法硬傷：動(dòng)詞。眾所周知，動(dòng)詞是一個(gè)句子中最重要的成分，句子可以缺任何東西，但是不能缺了動(dòng)詞。可是：
一句話不能有2個(gè)動(dòng)詞，也不能沒(méi)有謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。
11，It is advertising makes customers buy something impulsively.
正確形式：It is advertising that makes customers buy something impulsively.
錯(cuò)誤解析：因?yàn)?is 和makes 都是動(dòng)詞，所以該句話有2個(gè)動(dòng)詞，需要去掉一個(gè)動(dòng)詞，本句中可以把makes 前面增加that,這樣后面就是定于從句了。從而該句就只有一個(gè)動(dòng)詞。
12，There is a research shows that many parents are depend on teachers give support.
正確形式：There is a research showing that many parents are depending on teachers who give support.
錯(cuò)誤解析：本句的錯(cuò)誤太多，主要是謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞太多，要記住一個(gè)主句只能有一個(gè)位于動(dòng)詞，而一個(gè)從句也只能有一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。而主句中的is和show就是多一個(gè)重復(fù)了，而從句中：are ,depend, give都是動(dòng)詞，而只能有一個(gè)動(dòng)詞。
13，ere was a famous Chinese book describe a monkey , a pig , a sand monk and a true monk go to west for pilgrimage.
,確形式：There was a famous Chinese book describing a monkey , a pig , a sand monk and a true monk go to west for pilgrimage.
錯(cuò)誤解析：要記住一個(gè)主句只能有一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，而一個(gè)從句也只能有一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。而主句中的was 和describe就是多一個(gè)重復(fù)了，需要將describe 修改為：describing 作為后置定語(yǔ)。
14，e number of the population was decreased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population was increased in the years of 1996 and 2000, the data was then continue increase in the last 5 years.
正確形式：The number of the population decreased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population increased in the years of 1996 and 2000, and the data was then continuously increasing in the last 5 years.
錯(cuò)誤解析：要記住一個(gè)主句只能有一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，而該句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞太多，所以需要去掉was 并且將最后一個(gè)分句中的was then continue increase 中的continue改成副詞continuously, decrease 改成was decreasing.
15，I earned the money is the least.
正確形式：I earned the least money.或者my income was the least.
16， was a wolf come from Nanjing.
正確形式：I was a wolf coming from Nanjing.
17，ow there are always many new things come out every day.
正確形式：Now there are always many new things coming out every day.
18，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：
錯(cuò)誤表達(dá):There have many people believe that mobile phones are useful.
正確表達(dá)：There are many people who believe that mobile phones are useful.
錯(cuò)誤解析：(不存在There have的形式，而且There be結(jié)構(gòu)后不能再加謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。)
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