雅思寫作水平提升的語法修煉課之動詞篇
雅思寫作是極難的,要提高也是極不容易的,6分是一個大檻,大部分烤鴨會被卡于此。而以上,每0.5分都是一個不小的檻。雅思寫作分數低是很多雅思考生心中永遠的痛 。本文將聚焦于造成普遍低分的最重要原因之一——語法問題,為大家梳理一下最常見的語法硬傷:動詞。眾所周知,動詞是一個句子中最重要的成分,句子可以缺任何東西,但是不能缺了動詞。可是:
一句話不能有2個動詞,也不能沒有謂語動詞。
11,It is advertising makes customers buy something impulsively.
正確形式:It is advertising that makes customers buy something impulsively.
錯誤解析:因為 is 和makes 都是動詞,所以該句話有2個動詞,需要去掉一個動詞,本句中可以把makes 前面增加that,這樣后面就是定于從句了。從而該句就只有一個動詞。
12,There is a research shows that many parents are depend on teachers give support.
正確形式:There is a research showing that many parents are depending on teachers who give support.
錯誤解析:本句的錯誤太多,主要是謂語動詞太多,要記住一個主句只能有一個位于動詞,而一個從句也只能有一個謂語動詞。而主句中的is和show就是多一個重復了,而從句中:are ,depend, give都是動詞,而只能有一個動詞。
13,ere was a famous Chinese book describe a monkey , a pig , a sand monk and a true monk go to west for pilgrimage.
,確形式:There was a famous Chinese book describing a monkey , a pig , a sand monk and a true monk go to west for pilgrimage.
錯誤解析:要記住一個主句只能有一個謂語動詞,而一個從句也只能有一個謂語動詞。而主句中的was 和describe就是多一個重復了,需要將describe 修改為:describing 作為后置定語。
14,e number of the population was decreased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population was increased in the years of 1996 and 2000, the data was then continue increase in the last 5 years.
正確形式:The number of the population decreased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population increased in the years of 1996 and 2000, and the data was then continuously increasing in the last 5 years.
錯誤解析:要記住一個主句只能有一個謂語動詞,而該句中的謂語動詞太多,所以需要去掉was 并且將最后一個分句中的was then continue increase 中的continue改成副詞continuously, decrease 改成was decreasing.
15,I earned the money is the least.
正確形式:I earned the least money.或者my income was the least.
16, was a wolf come from Nanjing.
正確形式:I was a wolf coming from Nanjing.
17,ow there are always many new things come out every day.
正確形式:Now there are always many new things coming out every day.
18,謂語動詞:
錯誤表達:There have many people believe that mobile phones are useful.
正確表達:There are many people who believe that mobile phones are useful.
錯誤解析:(不存在There have的形式,而且There be結構后不能再加謂語動詞。)
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