雅思小作文考官9分范文 漲最標準寫作姿勢
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
首段：Introduction (paraphrase the question)導入轉述問題
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
二段：Overview (two main / general points)概述，講述2個主要的論點
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes. (192 words, band 9)
主體三、四段：elaboration on the points 詳述上述論點
這是考官simon最慣常的小作文行文方式：四段式(導入段+概述段+主體2段)，其中概述段起到了一個承上啟下的作用，類似于足球里的中場核心的只能，所以，對于如何寫好overview paragraph，simon還是提出了他的幾點看法。
1.An overview is simply a summary of the main things you can see.
overview是指簡單的概述你在圖表看到的主要東西。
2.Because the overview is so important, I recommend putting it at the beginning of your report, just after the introduction sentence.
因為它在小作文中如此重要，所以推薦放在較為顯眼的位置，及緊接在導入段之后寫。
3.I write two overview sentences. A one-sentence overview isn't really enough.
我一般寫2句式概述(即2個points)。1句式overview顯然不夠.
4.Try not to include specific numbers in the overview. Save the specifics for later paragraphs.
概述中不要使用具體的數據，這些細節應該留到下文中。
5.Look at the 'big picture' e.g. the overall change from the first year to the last year (if years are shown on the chart), the differences between whole categories rather than single numbers, or the total number of stages in a process.
試著從大局入手來寫。例如：從第一年到最后一年的總的變化;類別間而不是單獨數字間區別;整個過程中的不同的階段。
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