你的雅思寫作語法必修課之句子篇
在小站看過太多雅思大作文，每篇習作都或多或少地存在各種各樣的問題，而最直觀最觸目的一種，自然是語法問題了。這些語法錯誤，往往就像一顆顆沙子，讓咀嚼這篇作文的老師/考官非常地難以下咽。語法之于雅思寫作，就是如此重要。來看看關于最常見的語法硬傷：句子與非句子。
逗號不能夠連接2個完整的句子
19，There are plenty of universities in China , most of that are not good enough.
正確形式：There are plenty of universities in China , most of which are not good enough. There are plenty of universities in China and most of that are not good enough. / There are plenty of universities in China; most of that are not good enough. /There are plenty of universities in China .Most of which are not good enough.
錯誤解析： 逗號不能連接2個完整的句子。所以需要將其中一個句子變成從句，或者使用分號或者句號來代替逗號。
20，cry , you cry.
正確形式：I cry; you cry. / I cry and you cry. / I cry. You cry.
21, We all tried our best,however, we lost the game.
正確形式：We all tried our best. However, we lost the game./ We all tried our best; however, we lost the game.
錯誤解析：即使是however,也不能連接前后都是完整的句子，因為however是副詞，只有and 和but 這2個連接詞才可以連接2個完整的句子。
22， China has achieved great prosperity ,however ,its culture suffered a lot.
正確形式：China has achieved great prosperity .However ,its culture suffered a lot./China has achieved great prosperity; however,its culture suffered a lot.
錯誤解析：注意這點和單獨的however, 將一個句子的主語和謂語動詞隔開的句子有本質的區別。比如：students, however, always expect their high praise from parents and teachers. 該句中是一個句子，所以可以用however 將主語和謂語分開。
23，They always feel boring about visiting some places where they are no fresh and no extremely attractive talking points， therefore, local museums and historical sites cannot be drawn into much discussion as they are without cartoons, movie stars and sports.
正確形式：They always feel boring about visiting some places where they are no fresh and no extremely attractive talking points.Therefore, local museums and historical sites cannot be drawn into much discussion as they are without cartoons, movie stars and sports.
錯誤解析： 注意 therefore, on the other hand, on the contrary 這些類似的詞組或者副詞都是副詞成分，并不能連接前后都是完整的句子。所以需要修改為：將逗號改為句號或者分號。
24, Student s are always tired of sitting in the classroom for a whole morning, thus show their resentment with the current teaching method.
正確形式：Student s are always tired of sitting in the classroom for a whole morning, and thus show their resentment with the current teaching method.
錯誤解析：thus 照樣是插入語，是副詞成分，不是連接詞，所以不能連接前后都是完整的句子。
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