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In the past, knowledge was stored in books, but now it is stored in the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?過去知識儲藏在書籍里,現在知識保存在網絡中。是利是弊?
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解析
本周題目與上周比較接近,寫起來并不難,因為它非常貼近我們的日常話題。把知識存儲在網絡上自有其優勢,包括:存放量大,攜帶、讀取都方便,而且更利于知識的傳播,但印刷的書籍也有優勢,比如不依賴電子設備載體,印刷書的錯誤更少,更精致,還有讀印刷書總給我們一種與作者更直接交流的溫暖感覺,等等。
參考范文
Today we all believe that knowledge is just at the tip of our fingers because all knowledge seems to be have been stored electronically and is easilyaccessible on the Internet. There have been mixed responses to this development, and personally I think more and more people will rely on the Internet for knowledge though the printed books will never completely disappear.
(1) 本段引出話題,提出自己下文擬論證的觀點:知識上網有很多優勢,但印刷書籍也不會消失。請學習唐老師是如何規避“有些人認為......,另外一些人認為.......”這個模板套路的。
(2) At the tip of fingers 近在咫尺;在指尖
(3) Electronically 電子化地
(4) Accessible 可以獲取的
(5) Mixed responses 各種不同的反應
Storing knowledge in the Internet has obvious advantages. Owing to itsvirtually unlimited capacity, the Internet can store all knowledge in the world. This makes it quite unnecessary for us to spend that much money constructing thebrick-and-mortar libraries. Then as long as we have Internet connection, we can find whatever we desire to know no matter where we are. So, rather than carrying heavy books on American culture with me, I can sit at a coffee table and with a few simple keyboard clicks, I can have immediate access to any book in the world on that topic. What is more, if I would like to share some important knowledge with my friend, again a few simple clicks would do, but were the knowledge stored in the book form, then I would probably have to find time to go to the post-office and send the book to him/her, which is far more time-consuming and less efficient.
(1)本段分析網絡儲存知識的好處:首先是節約錢;其次是容易找到;再其次是容易分享。請各位讀者認真學習唐老師是不露痕跡地層層推進這三層意思。
(2)Owing to 由于,因為
(3)Virtually (=nearly; actually; almost) 幾乎;實際上地
(4)Capacity 容量;空間;能力
(5)Brick-and-mortar 實體的(相對于虛擬的)
(6)Time-consuming 耗時的
(7)Efficient 有效率的
Keeping knowledge in the Internet, however, will make us excessively dependent on electronic devices. Simply put, in case of power-off or computer break-down, we will be thrown into a terribly helpless situation. But this is not a problem for people who learn things from books. Additionally, many people simply prefer reading real books for knowledge to online sources, because they believe books are more reliable and they find themselves emotionally and intellectually more attached to knowledge in books.
(1)本段講網絡存儲知識的壞處(讓我們過于依賴電子產品)以及書籍的好處。但唐老師此處采用略寫的方式,因為主要觀點是將網絡存儲的優勢。
(2)Excessively 過分地
(3)Be dependent on... 依賴于......
(4)Prefer ...to... 更喜歡......不喜歡......
(5)Attached 緊密的;依戀的
My conclusion, then, is that knowledge will increasingly find its way to the Internet and it will make knowledge storage more economical and convenient, yet books will never vanish because there are always people who would like toembrace knowledge in printed form.
(1)本段對前文觀點進行總結。這里需要高度提煉(但不見得一定總結到前文中的每個點,照顧到最重要的即可)。
(2)Find its way to... 走進......
(3)Economical 節約的
(4)Vanish 消失
(5)Embrace 擁抱
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