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In the past, knowledge was stored in books, but now it is stored in the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?過(guò)去知識(shí)儲(chǔ)藏在書(shū)籍里,現(xiàn)在知識(shí)保存在網(wǎng)絡(luò)中。是利是弊?
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解析
本周題目與上周比較接近,寫(xiě)起來(lái)并不難,因?yàn)樗浅YN近我們的日常話題。把知識(shí)存儲(chǔ)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上自有其優(yōu)勢(shì),包括:存放量大,攜帶、讀取都方便,而且更利于知識(shí)的傳播,但印刷的書(shū)籍也有優(yōu)勢(shì),比如不依賴(lài)電子設(shè)備載體,印刷書(shū)的錯(cuò)誤更少,更精致,還有讀印刷書(shū)總給我們一種與作者更直接交流的溫暖感覺(jué),等等。
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Today we all believe that knowledge is just at the tip of our fingers because all knowledge seems to be have been stored electronically and is easilyaccessible on the Internet. There have been mixed responses to this development, and personally I think more and more people will rely on the Internet for knowledge though the printed books will never completely disappear.
(1) 本段引出話題,提出自己下文擬論證的觀點(diǎn):知識(shí)上網(wǎng)有很多優(yōu)勢(shì),但印刷書(shū)籍也不會(huì)消失。請(qǐng)學(xué)習(xí)唐老師是如何規(guī)避“有些人認(rèn)為......,另外一些人認(rèn)為.......”這個(gè)模板套路的。
(2) At the tip of fingers 近在咫尺;在指尖
(3) Electronically 電子化地
(4) Accessible 可以獲取的
(5) Mixed responses 各種不同的反應(yīng)
Storing knowledge in the Internet has obvious advantages. Owing to itsvirtually unlimited capacity, the Internet can store all knowledge in the world. This makes it quite unnecessary for us to spend that much money constructing thebrick-and-mortar libraries. Then as long as we have Internet connection, we can find whatever we desire to know no matter where we are. So, rather than carrying heavy books on American culture with me, I can sit at a coffee table and with a few simple keyboard clicks, I can have immediate access to any book in the world on that topic. What is more, if I would like to share some important knowledge with my friend, again a few simple clicks would do, but were the knowledge stored in the book form, then I would probably have to find time to go to the post-office and send the book to him/her, which is far more time-consuming and less efficient.
(1)本段分析網(wǎng)絡(luò)儲(chǔ)存知識(shí)的好處:首先是節(jié)約錢(qián);其次是容易找到;再其次是容易分享。請(qǐng)各位讀者認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)唐老師是不露痕跡地層層推進(jìn)這三層意思。
(2)Owing to 由于,因?yàn)?/p>
(3)Virtually (=nearly; actually; almost) 幾乎;實(shí)際上地
(4)Capacity 容量;空間;能力
(5)Brick-and-mortar 實(shí)體的(相對(duì)于虛擬的)
(6)Time-consuming 耗時(shí)的
(7)Efficient 有效率的
Keeping knowledge in the Internet, however, will make us excessively dependent on electronic devices. Simply put, in case of power-off or computer break-down, we will be thrown into a terribly helpless situation. But this is not a problem for people who learn things from books. Additionally, many people simply prefer reading real books for knowledge to online sources, because they believe books are more reliable and they find themselves emotionally and intellectually more attached to knowledge in books.
(1)本段講網(wǎng)絡(luò)存儲(chǔ)知識(shí)的壞處(讓我們過(guò)于依賴(lài)電子產(chǎn)品)以及書(shū)籍的好處。但唐老師此處采用略寫(xiě)的方式,因?yàn)橹饕^點(diǎn)是將網(wǎng)絡(luò)存儲(chǔ)的優(yōu)勢(shì)。
(2)Excessively 過(guò)分地
(3)Be dependent on... 依賴(lài)于......
(4)Prefer ...to... 更喜歡......不喜歡......
(5)Attached 緊密的;依戀的
My conclusion, then, is that knowledge will increasingly find its way to the Internet and it will make knowledge storage more economical and convenient, yet books will never vanish because there are always people who would like toembrace knowledge in printed form.
(1)本段對(duì)前文觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。這里需要高度提煉(但不見(jiàn)得一定總結(jié)到前文中的每個(gè)點(diǎn),照顧到最重要的即可)。
(2)Find its way to... 走進(jìn)......
(3)Economical 節(jié)約的
(4)Vanish 消失
(5)Embrace 擁抱
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